The Human Sin : Trailer

Huge file size. I'll tell ya what i think after i watch it.

Description is cool I think. I like that "question" and then "answer". I'm going to put that to my campaing also! I later watch the cinematic.

Somehow, this seems VERY big, as it doesnt download immidiently.
Edit: Remember to save this. Its Protectet, and cannot be openet in World Editor (Atleast, i couldnt)

The file size is 22mb because it have voice and music on it. Please be patient while downloading it.

Oh my GOD! That was Insanly good! 5/5 !
I hope the real deal is EVEN better!

Only things i dislike is Narrator, Gabriel and Baxters voices-
And if Baxter is going to be main character, you should get a voice actor for him to- His not very loud, and Gabriel (Misha) Is kinda hard to understand.

Elsewhere =

Sorry but i think the sounds is very bad, but the music is nice. Terrain ok. Story a bit strange I think but after all i think its ok so i l give it a 3/5 :)

Excellent Cinematic Buddy!!

There are still tons of areas you can improve on though :p

One thing which is of course optional but which would make your cinematic a lot better, would be to get a proper voice actor for all your charakters, the "computer" voices sound really fake lol.

Some of the grammar is still bad, but you can't do much about it anymore, considering you've already got the voice overs for everything :/

Consider increasing the far Z of all your camera's, in some parts of your cinematic the scene just suddenly "cuts off", which has a bit of a weirdish effect, if you increase the far Z this will stop but (may for people with older computers) lead to slower playback and even some lag.

The Terrain is really good, it captures the moment well and does a great job with realism, and the atmosphere and general environment is pretty great as well :p

Music Choice was excellent also, and all your non generated voices were really good, the acting was realistic and fitted well to the characters.
Great Job all in all, I hope to see the completed version soon, and the campaign after it :D :D :D

I'll give this a 4 / 5,
mainly because of the issues listed above ;)

Don't forget that you can greatly reduce filesize by decreasing the quality of the voices and the music (use a program like Audacity), because atm it's extremely large, even though it has so much music and custom voices in it...

First, the narrator sounds like a robot. You could have asked your girlfriend or just any girl to do that, or just do it yourself. But that voice drives one crazy.
The characters (except for that three headed dog) speak too slow. It's ... like ... they ... will ... never ... finish. Also, Garbriel is somehow like a bad actor. His text is somehow ... strange.

Then, the story is confusing: Shouldn't Hades be glad that all the humans are sinful and bad? I mean, he lives in hell, and Christians believe that hell is the worst place to be. So, I don't really get why he wants to wipe out the humans (using methods that are way worse than what the humans did).
Also, when Hades and Gabriel talk (but that's just a minor thing), meteors are falling down and sometimes hit them.
That's what I just sporadicly can think of, there is more.

As i said :D
Just one more issue :D
I really Lol'ed when i saw some dog drowning in the water at the "Humans began to be greedish" Scene- Look closely :D

ok, the narrators voice is a bit annoying(like my math teacher's actually) but all in all, i think it's got a decent storyline so I'll look out for the end result. You score 87/100

I was trying to update it by finding a voice actor for narrator and baxter, but nobody volunteer for it and it is hard to find female voice actor.

You want the campaign and this cinematic for the contest??
But the sounds are good, but I'd died to download it, 3 hours and half!!!!!!!!!!!

What contest ? If you mean the campaign contest host by me, I cannot participate on it cause I am the host. At the contest, mod & admin are not allowed to participate.

Here are my thoughts about your cinematic, Septimus.

Positive/good sides

• The best part was when Hades made a magic turning whole landscape to black. Nice effect there. Good job.
• Some of the terrain were nice. For example the beginning's waterfall place.
• Some of the voice actors were quite good.
• Musics were fine.
• A lot of camera movements, it makes the cinematic more fresh.

Negative/bad sides/should be improved

• Narrator's voice was too "robotic".
• Some of the texts were not spoken(at the beginning).
• Some of the terrrain was not so good.
• Most of the fights were just: "attack, attack and attack".
• It's a good thing to put camera to move, but not all the time. I think you moved the camera too much. Very rare to see this. :D
• Sometimes units just stopped moving(because you used animations and forget to use after animations "reset animation of unit").

After all, you have to remember that you are becoming better everyday. If you have enough patient, your cinematic/campaign will be great. Why not the greatest? You just need to listen people, they will tell what to improve.

Let's have an example. When I first released my campaign. Everyone just said it was bad etc etc, but then I updated it very often, and now it have become great! And it's still becoming greater! I hope this will happen to your projects also.