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[Cinematic] Minion Battle
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Its a story about one Ghoul and one Footman.Ghoul always want the soul of Crusader Footman but he can't get it.Now he has a chance in this battle.
.Watch it and if you found bugs say please!I wanna to send this map to THV.
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Okay, watched it, and have to say: it's very short.
>> it's very short, make it longer
>> when the ghoul attacks the footman, and he teleports away, the corpse is still laying there
>> terrain was lacking
>> camera was lacking
you should put more effort in cinematics, because a cinematic should have these things:
>> nice terrain
>> good camera
>> longer watching duration
>> good story
Well, your cinematic don't need a proper story, because it's a battle between two guys.
And every point I listed was lacking. So maybe you make it longer, improve the terrain.
Hope that helps to improve it.
>> it's very short, make it longer
>> when the ghoul attacks the footman, and he teleports away, the corpse is still laying there
>> terrain was lacking
>> camera was lacking
you should put more effort in cinematics, because a cinematic should have these things:
>> nice terrain
>> good camera
>> longer watching duration
>> good story
Well, your cinematic don't need a proper story, because it's a battle between two guys.
And every point I listed was lacking. So maybe you make it longer, improve the terrain.
Hope that helps to improve it.
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