[Cinematic] Watch & Feedback

Hey.

Just a very small cinematic. Full of effects, etc. Watch and give feedback. I will make the effects better if you have any suggestions. There are 5 stages and I won't add more stages, but I can improve the stages(if there's anything to improve?).

In the campaign there is also a dialog, and the cinematic is as long as the dialog is(about 2-5 min, not sure). Now the cinematic is only about 1 min long.

The cinematic isn't protected at all. Thanks.

Very impressive effect, I feel like it was a hypnotise.. lol..

You just gives me a great idea for my next battle cinematic.

Reminds me of Music Fountain cinematic, but that was something different.

Nice, not very hard to do, but nice.

Thanks, but I still need more suggestions.

One guy told me there is too much light. Perhaps I should change some light effects to red type effects?

EDIT: Cinematic added to the campaign. I don't need anymore feedback.