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HeretoDLstuff · 05-07-2008, 07:13 PM

Downloading them now, Ill edit the post later!

Well, its so long I forgot the bad parts.

Mainly, you need to work on spelling and grammar. Also, when the group of guards came, they were not in formation, and they all went into a pile. (In the first one.)

Its pretty good storyline, but the text takes too long to go by.

05-07-2008, 07:13 PM	#17 (permalink)
HeretoDLstuff HAX!! Flying abomination! Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 2,150	Downloading them now, Ill edit the post later! Well, its so long I forgot the bad parts. Mainly, you need to work on spelling and grammar. Also, when the group of guards came, they were not in formation, and they all went into a pile. (In the first one.) Its pretty good storyline, but the text takes too long to go by. __________________ [center]Vote for the hive! Last edited by HeretoDLstuff; 05-07-2008 at 08:23 PM..