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You also mispelled "ridiculous" when they were on the second floor of the brothel. And speaking of second floor, it looks like they're on the first floor when you look out the window. Otherwise, great chapter as always. I really like the action sequences, except for that one footman who just blocked every shield poor Lina shot at him. You'd figure she would've come up with a new strategy faster.
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Also, the stars come out too late when she does the counter measure, he dies before the stars hit him. :<
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