My very first icon :P

[f0rsAk3n]

So I started reading a few tutorials on how to make icons, and I was intrigued. Here's my first one.

I'm not going to submit this one. As they say "NEVER submit your first resource type"

Its suppose to be a "Glowing Sword". Made it completely from scratch.

...So...What do you guys think?

 

[r0bfish]

I thinks it's good, but need to be more sharpen.

 

[breebree123]

looks good. .but needs more shading. .it has too much highlights,and the glow,more shading on it. .i hope you can work on that . .

 

[f0rsAk3n]

Added more shading and sharpened it a little .

 

[breebree123]

more glow on the yellow thingy and more highlights on,dont touch the sword,its already nice and ok

 

[Hawkwing]

Yes, you need to work on the shading. Also, it's very 'noisy' - as in there are lots of little strong pixels everywhere.

 

[Panda]

The overall shading on the blade is lacking, i would suggest fixing the shading on the blade and make the whole sword itself visible and is in front of the backround.