[Cinematic] The Champion

[ModelTester]

Hi, I would like your suggestions in my cinematic "The Champion" so I can improve my map. Your suggestions and improvements will be added to credits.

Story
This map was originally based on my first map, Arthas vs Illidan which was rejected. Now I'm trying to fix it.

I fixed the text. It it is now bottom of the cinematic.
Okay the trees are not floating off the ground anymore.

Thanks Septimus and Restor

 

[Septimus]

No fog, the tree root was clearly seen floating around the ground, waiting syndrome, the game text isn't at the bottom of the view.

There's your problem.

 

[ModelTester]

How do I make the trees stop floating?

 

[Restor]

normally ctrl+pg down

 

[Squidle]

Okay... I GONNA WATCH IT, give some + and - Thingys and then a rating 'bout it, IF YOU LIKE IT OR NOT!

Edit:

+ Nice models
- Strange black thingy
- Cam suckz.
- Terrain?
- Short

I give it a... 1/5

 

[ModelTester]

If you already watched it, you already should know that I didn't finish the entire cinematic :\ I'm still working on it so it's more action package and longer.

To Squidle:
What Strange black things?
Why does the camera suck? Can you give me some criticism in why it sucks?
What can I do to improve my terrain?
If you're an expert terrainer, you would tell me what needs to be improved..

 

[Squidle]

If you already watched it, you already should know that I didn't finish the entire cinematic :\ I'm still working on it so it's more action package and longer.

To Squidle:
What Strange black things?
Why does the camera suck? Can you give me some criticism in why it sucks?
What can I do to improve my terrain?
If you're an expert terrainer, you would tell me what needs to be improved..

When the cam is moving you see (I do) a huge black... THING!
The cam is not very smooth, you should use 1, 2 or 3 cams.
I didn't noticed it was a trailer, so the terrain was kinda small...

EDIT: Plust, there are (almost) no doodadz. You should add some rocks, ice and critters

 

[Lord_of_sausage]

UUUh... Okay.... watched it.

-Increase the FarZ value.
-More detailed terrain (look up a terraining tutorial)
-well, just improve it... I hoped for a more.... detailed fight, instead of just Arthas cleaving his weapon...