Yin-Yang Island v1.2

[deepstrasz]

Please write changelogs in the map thread description or as a post here linking in the thread description. Do not force us to go to other sites.

1. Cannibalize has tooltip missing. Learn about tooltips and descriptions:
   Tooltip Tutorial
   Creating Good Descriptions
2. You've use regular Warcraft III spells and heroes which are highly overused. You should try making some spells or using custom ones (Spells | HIVE) or being more creative.
3. Items are regular Warcraft III ones.
4. Original Warcraft III heroes aren't balanced (spells, movement/attack speed etc.) for 1v1 or the like but for melee. All of them having Blink makes everything even weirder when anyone can just run.

Generally, you should distance yourself more from the original game. There are too many maps like this one and frankly, it's nothing new or creative. It's a typical arena with typical heroes and items.

Take a look at the arena maps we have here and get inspired.

If you're not OK with this review and decision, you are free to ask other reviewers for their opinions.

Substandard.

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M A P - D E S C R I P T I O N

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BB CODES
BB Codes | HIVE

MELEE MAPS
Description Guide - Melee Maps
Describing Your Melee Map
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3

MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

ADDITIONAL NECESSARY INFORMATION

• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
  
• A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
  
• Map thread tags are important. Please use those that fit and not more or none.

M A P - C R E A T I O N - G U I D E S

Details

GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

If you're not satisfied with the review and wish another opinion, contact the other reviewers or use the staff contact:
Paillan
twojstaryjakcie
Daffa the Mage
https://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/staff-contact.692/

 

[RedMapleLeaf]

Please write changelogs in the map thread description or as a post here linking in the thread description. Do not force us to go to other sites.

1. Cannibalize has tooltip missing. Learn about tooltips and descriptions:
   Tooltip Tutorial
   Creating Good Descriptions
2. You've use regular Warcraft III spells and heroes which are highly overused. You should try making some spells or using custom ones (Spells | HIVE) or being more creative.
3. Items are regular Warcraft III ones.
4. Original Warcraft III heroes aren't balanced (spells, movement/attack speed etc.) for 1v1 or the like but for melee. All of them having Blink makes everything even weirder when anyone can just run.

Generally, you should distance yourself more from the original game. There are too many maps like this one and frankly, it's nothing new or creative. It's a typical arena with typical heroes and items.

Take a look at the arena maps we have here and get inspired.

If you're not OK with this review and decision, you are free to ask other reviewers for their opinions.

Substandard.

---

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R U L E S

Site Rules
Map Submission Rules


M A P - D E S C R I P T I O N

Details

BB CODES
BB Codes | HIVE

MELEE MAPS
Description Guide - Melee Maps
Describing Your Melee Map
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3

MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

ADDITIONAL NECESSARY INFORMATION

• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
  
• A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
  
• Map thread tags are important. Please use those that fit and not more or none.

M A P - C R E A T I O N - G U I D E S

Details

GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

If you're not satisfied with the review and wish another opinion, contact the other reviewers or use the staff contact:
Paillan
twojstaryjakcie
Daffa the Mage
https://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/staff-contact.692/

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