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Undead Scorceres.BLP

Submitted by pie0107
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
This is my first skin that is done with mostly free hand and with TC in the runes on the cap i did not change the shoulders because i dident have any ideas for them
Update:Added Shading

Keywords:
Jaina,Undead
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Undead Scorceres.BLP (Texture)

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11:25, 4th Feb 2010 67chrome: way to sloppy. I'd highly recommend fallowing along with some of the skinning tutorials here (they are located under the 2D art section of the tutorials). I don't see any changes from when I reviewed this before. You...
  1. 11:25, 4th Feb 2010
    67chrome: way to sloppy. I'd highly recommend fallowing along with some of the skinning tutorials here (they are located under the 2D art section of the tutorials).
    I don't see any changes from when I reviewed this before. You can check out the tutorial links in one of the last posts on this, but you really need to put a lot more effort into this skin for it to ever get approvd. If you need advice on making it better post it in the 2D art forums, people are usually much more forgiving there as well. A lot of that has to do with the purpose of that section compared to this one, here everything submitted should be completed.
     
  2. Evillizard

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    First coment :3
    I don't want to be rude at all, but this is a big wad o' fail.
    I have no idea what you did to make it like this, but you need to practice and show other people on the hive the skin before you submit.
     
  3. pie0107

    pie0107

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    Download it first
    and at it in viewer or magos then comment because the screen is horrible but in the veiwer and warcrafft 3 it looks good
     
  4. Catch_ya

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    It has nothing with the screenshot to do. Needs shadings, highlights. Remember that the sun comes from above so the shadings on the leg ( if it's shadings ) is wrongly placed.
     
  5. Orthon

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    Yeah it needs shading and highlights. And more details also... Personally i don't like skin, but what you did with cape team color is awesome :O
     
  6. Bernkastel

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    Srsly no. (Sorry for this uncreative comment)
     
  7. Piwlady

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    Holy sweet jesus! NOOOOoooo....
     
  8. pie0107

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    Consructive critisisum pls
     
  9. Fingolfin

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    If there's one thing this site doesn't need, it's another sloppy covered-in-blood-because-it-looks-cool skin.
     
  10. supertoinkz

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    PLEASE STOP USING SHARPEN TOOL/FILTER IF YOU DON'T KNOW HOW TO OR WHEN TO PROPERLY USE IT.

    srsly D:
    I tested it in wc3 but meh

    As I see, you used brush/pencil with different opacity then UBERsharpen it
    It does not look like undead, it looks like it just massacred 100 people
    Also please do what Chrome said, it will really help you

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  11. Zanekok

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    Ehm i dont see shading and highlighs???
     
  12. Newominus

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    For some parts it looks like you did it with paint.
     
  13. Misha

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    uh... just stay away from photoshop... o_O
     
  14. knight26

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    what the f***?
     
  15. Dentothor

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    No one could possibly give any constructive critisism to this other than, either stop skinning or read some tuts to improve your skills. as you can see, most skins on the site have details, shading and creative aspects and unique characters. yours on the other hand has no shading, barely any details, (the only details you have are with a dump bucket overlay. come on. who uses those?) and just random paint brush sploches everywhere. not a single person in their right mind would have a use for this. so it would be preferred if you deleted this and tried a different tactic in your skinning skills. Thank You.

    ~Dentothor
     
  16. takakenji

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    horrible
     
  17. chilla_killa

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    You become better and better, but you should learn more technique.
    Have a look at those tutorials:

    http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/2d-art-tutorials-281/anti-noobism-texturing-92402/
    http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/2d-art-tutorials-281/mr-goblins-tutorial-110127/
    http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/2d-art-tutorials-281/skinning-chainmail-tutorial-7330/
    http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/2d-art-tutorials-281/texturing-armour-45626/
    http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/2d-art-tutorials-281/off-site-tutorials-143859/

    You must learn how to shade and put highlights properly because otherwise your skins look ugly and unrealistic.

    And don't let them get you down with their unfriendly comments, keep learning and practising!

    Greets chilla_killa