two lands

[Moderator]

02:18, 18th Aug 2008
Septimus: Lot's of terrible mistake, fix it and it should be fine.

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/785313-post6.html

08:52, 3rd Sep 2008
Rui: Stop approving unacceptable maps. We are not EpicWar.
Rejected.

 

[Legion_King]

Better to have a bigger and multiplayer map.

 

[Marak-Zul]

Better to have a bigger and multiplayer map.

why??? mb someone like 1v1 or 2v2??

 

[Revan(Rom)]

Hmm...i see.but why only 1 player?

 

[Marak-Zul]

Hmm...i see.but why only 1 player?

when u can help me with thats problem?

 

[Septimus]

This map had been examined by Alexis Septimus.
If you think this map review is not accurate or require another review, feel free to contact Alexis Septimus. But, map would only be review again for second time and also for the last time unless under certain circumstances. It would be selfish to request constantly a mod/admin to keep review your map as there is many other maps waiting for approval as well.

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1) Terrain - Average (3)
2) Ingenuity -
3) Minor Error - Bad (2)
4) Replay Value - Bad (2)
5) Fun factor/gameplay - Average (3)
6) Use of imported material -
7) Single player -
8) AI support -
9) Camera -
10) Originality -
11) File Size - Excellent (5)
12) Balancing -
13) Packaging - Horrible (1)
14) Credits -
15) Storyline - Horrible (1)
16) Theme -
17) Protection - Excellent (5)
18) Quality - Average (3)
19) Description/Information - Horrible (1)
20) Hiveworkshop rules & regulation - Excellent (5)

Total Accumulation Point : 26/55 + (-300) (Review) = -274

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[-] - Horrible storyline, I do not even know what is it all about.
[-] - Gold amount should be 25k since there is no alternate gold mine.
[-] - All gold mine unguarded.
[-] - All player same force, how to start the game ?
[-] - 1 player 3 computer, how to play with friends/buddy at LAN/Internet ?
[-] - Closed gate could effect AI player, they only able to cross the river from the west side.
[-] - Location of player red and blue too close to one another.
[-] - Should not fix starting location.

Review : Lot's of terrible mistake have been done at this map although the terrain look rather decent to me.

All team same force, only 1 player. How do you expect this map to be play ?

In addition, all gold mine must be guarded whether there is a starting location near the gold mine or not. Except if the map is a 1 vs 1 melee map, then only there is no need for creep to guard the gold mine.

Scenario properties should be left untouch unless you adding player controller.

And I do not need to point out the rest of the error as I have post it above this review.

Another -300 point for this map.

Remove those error and this map should be fine.

Score - -274/100
Rating - 1/5
Condition - Terrible
Status - Pending (Suspend)
Review - 1

The map might not be fully tested, if any user of the map found bug/error or anything else.
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