TheBlooddancer's Terrains

[TheBlooddancer]

Well here they are
I will create more if people show interest

Please comment, and give Feedback-
Criticize it aswell-
Teach me, tell me what to do better, and what you like.

Snowscape

1st.
This was inspired of an ordinary Snow-landscape.
First attempt of Using Fog, and the UTM.

 

[Wolle]

Well, i cant say that i like the camera angle, it is to close to that cliff and that tree in the front, i would suggest deleting those or moving the camera.

My second suggestion is varying your tiles, place some snowy dirt or snowy grass at places that the snow wouldnt most likely be as thick, like under trees and the pillars of the archway

Also, instead of taking you screensshot ingame, try and take the screenshot from the WE, just press V and lock onto your camera. to prevent the green selection circle of death just right click in the tool palette.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

NICE!! i really like the magic feeling you brang us too... gratz! the only thing i could say .. is that your sky is to close of us.. you need a ''background''

 

[~Void~]

Interesting, maybe a bit too random though

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Thank you at yours Replies:

@Wolle
I couldnt find any proper snow-tiles
and it was hard to vary them.

@Mr.Goblin
Thank you - The reason for the sky, is that its a small map.

@~Void~
Yah- First try ^^

Edit:
More comments please?
Should i add More?

 

[thedeathunterxx]

this is nice actually , i kinda thought it looked like a snow scape from a certain video game ( dont remember which )

but it doesn't seem realistic, even though i dont think that was what you were going for. The texture of that arch really dedrades the reality of it, and the camera size make it look a bit more unreal.

but i likeed it : )

wayz to make it better :

1) use more small doodads like using rocks and shrubs, for the ground is a bit bare.
Even though it is snowy, try and put in some blue colored shrubs and decrease Z height of them to below level, to make them seem submerged by snow.

2) try to decorate that arch with something high textured too hide its ugly texture ( for instance, put rocks with increased z on it etc.

3) change the camera angle, it looks funny

4) lastly, fix the background a little, for instance add a small mounatinous thing back there, cause it seems like the sky cuts off a forest or somethin back there.


------ sry, i dont relly give extended stuff like this, you hav potential wit tha UTM

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Thanks for the Reply
I know the Arch ruins it a bit, but didnt think of it when i made it
And thanks for the hint with the submerged doodads, its hard to place doodads on the snow if its should look real.

 

[FrIkY]

It looks ok, little bit crowded but, ok... but what bothers me is that there's no background

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Well there is a Background, but i tried to make it Noon, so that it would fit Winter times.

 

[FrIkY]

Actually, yes, there is background, but... it looks like there's ''the end of the world''