1. Updated Resource Submission Rules: All model & skin resource submissions must now include an in-game screenshot. This is to help speed up the moderation process and to show how the model and/or texture looks like from the in-game camera.
    Dismiss Notice
  2. DID YOU KNOW - That you can unlock new rank icons by posting on the forums or winning contests? Click here to customize your rank or read our User Rank Policy to see a list of ranks that you can unlock. Have you won a contest and still havn't received your rank award? Then please contact the administration.
    Dismiss Notice
  3. The 18th Icon Contest is ON! Choose any ingame unit and give him/her Hero abilities. Good luck to all.
    Dismiss Notice
  4. The Secrets of Warcraft 3 have revealed interesting works. The RESULTS for Abelhawk's Mini-Mapping Contest #15 have come out!
    Dismiss Notice
  5. Contestants are to create a scene set in the Stone Age. Come and see what you can come up with. We wish you the best of luck!
    Dismiss Notice
  6. Colour outside the lines! Techtree Contest #13 is a go. The contest is optionally paired.
    Dismiss Notice
  7. Night Rider gained several songs for his journey. The poll for the 12th Music Contest has started. Check it out!
    Dismiss Notice
  8. Greetings cerebrates, our Swarm needs new spawners that will have numerous children. Join the HIVE's 31st Modeling Contest - Spawners and Spawned! The contest is optionally paired.
    Dismiss Notice
  9. Join other hivers in a friendly concept-art contest. The contestants have to create a genie coming out of its container. We wish you the best of luck!
    Dismiss Notice
  10. Check out the Staff job openings thread.
    Dismiss Notice
Dismiss Notice
60,000 passwords have been reset on July 8, 2019. If you cannot login, read this.

The Story of My Campaign

Discussion in 'Screenwriting, Storyboarding & Concept Creation' started by [E]clipse, Mar 4, 2015.

  1. [E]clipse

    [E]clipse

    Joined:
    Jan 6, 2015
    Messages:
    559
    Resources:
    0
    Resources:
    0
    Hi every one !!! I am making a campaign out of warcraft lore , The name of the Campaign is:-

    Guardians of Xar'ayisa

    The fall of an Empire




    The Story of the campaign goes something like this:-

    show story
    The kingdom of Xar’aysia was the most peaceful place the whole world had ever seen. It was so because of the Great King Xaras Tirith who wanted nothing more than the welfare of his people and all the allied kingdoms. The army of Xar’aysia was the strongest with the largest army among all. The kingdom was well known due to its victory over the cursed land named “Zeldan” which was later turned into a peaceful settlement called Inkasia or the land of joys in their sacred language. The former ruler of Zeldan, Zashara was set free by King Xaras after his victory over Zeldan. The people of his kingdom considered this act as a wise act of forgiveness but among thousands of people only one man “Indra’nil” the advisor and the head of justice of Xar’aysia who was also loyal to his king (Xaras Tirith) realized the danger of setting an Adversary free. After having weeks and months of conversation on this topic the king refused and declared that “someone who is incapable of harming our Kingdom shall not be our enemy”. On hearing this Indra’nil was disappointed. Later on after 7 peaceful years passed when King Xaras Tirith had a child his child was named Valcois Tirith meaning “HOPE” in their language, His nick name was Valc that meant the same. When he grew up and celebrated his 3rd birth year, a strange prophet who had the birthmark of the cursed Zeldanians said that One day there will be Cataclysm between this sacred land of Xar’aysia and Zeldanian Gods, The gods of Darkness. This prophecy was ignored by the king but was taken into consideration by Indra’Nil. Years passed then came the day of Horror for the Xar’aysia. When the king was as old as 65 years and the prince Valcois was 29 years old, a dark army arrived at the borders of Inkasia the land of pleasures. The people of Xar’aysia were not aware of this threat. But Indra’Nil was gifted with the powers to study the traces and essence of magic and life. Thus he could also detect darkness from a far distance. Xaras trusted Indra’Nil, So on hearing this news he sent the vast army of Xar’aysia to fight for their motherland. The king knew that he could not win easily so he also included price Valcois and the allied Empires in this battle. The army of the Xar’aysia was outnumbered by than that of Zeldanians & unlike any other war fought by this Mighty Empire this battle could only be ended in one way …… Defeat for Xar’aysia. The King lost his long conquered land with his life and his people were slaughtered like wild animals and killed like pests. The Zeldanians did not show any mercy. Valcois was saved from the grasp of death by Indra’Nil. Now there was only one way to bring Xar’aysia back to life….. A path feared by strongest of the warriors. A path to the dimension of Kronsis where lived the Great Aspects of the Elements. This was the dimension that gave birth to earth according to Xar’aysian mythology. Valcois had to reach the plains unknown by oldest of the Scholars. But in the long journey there was the Zeldanian Lord of War “Zel’Quarosh” who had faced defeat only once Against the Empire of Xar’aysia which was now in his control. The empire of Valc’s father now stands in crisis the people lay in sorrow... The rightful throne of Valcois is being used by Zel’Quarosh

    To avenge the death of his father and the slaughtering of his people he sets off his journey with the aid of 3 Elite warriors of the kingdom assigned by the late king Xaras. Lady Ishani , Ikaran the Descendant of Light and Odin’Nil the son of Indra’nil and the Warchief of the rightful King Valcois.


    I will add more to the story later, some further part of the story is thought and just needs to be written down

    Please inform me If u have any doubts about the storyline Or If I forgot some details through a VM,PM or a comment.

    Please reply... I need response and views on this story
     
  2. LordDz

    LordDz

    Joined:
    May 11, 2007
    Messages:
    4,308
    Resources:
    0
    Resources:
    0
  3. [E]clipse

    [E]clipse

    Joined:
    Jan 6, 2015
    Messages:
    559
    Resources:
    0
    Resources:
    0
    Yup , I paused the work beacause when I bought the book I thought the writer is Richard A A. Knaak so the book must be good , when I read the more than Half of the pages it was good as it held suspense but towards the end the story was not good enough, I thought I will edit the story and continue with my work later as I had progressed very less and it took a lot of time and paperwork to convert a fictional place in book to a real map.

    However If I see any hope I will do that one after this campaign

    BTW: How is the story?
     
  4. Only a first plan, I will cut it in detail and there is also a third person missing.
    What do you think ? Green is the appropriate colour ?

    EDIT: upsa, wrong thread...
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Apr 29, 2015
  5. CraftiiN

    CraftiiN

    Joined:
    Jan 6, 2015
    Messages:
    14
    Resources:
    0
    Resources:
    0
    The Story is really good, I'm really excited about this and expect to play every beta and of course the final release. Keep up the good work! :ogre_icwydt:
     
  6. Dr. E

    Dr. E

    Joined:
    Oct 12, 2014
    Messages:
    65
    Resources:
    0
    Resources:
    0
    I like the story very, very much. And I mean very much. Although we'll see how it goes.
     
  7. [E]clipse

    [E]clipse

    Joined:
    Jan 6, 2015
    Messages:
    559
    Resources:
    0
    Resources:
    0
    Thanks ... That encourages me. I facing some problems with maps though. :)
     
  8. WhiteFang

    WhiteFang

    Joined:
    Jul 6, 2014
    Messages:
    3,302
    Resources:
    0
    Resources:
    0
    This sounds good,nice job!
     
  9. [E]clipse

    [E]clipse

    Joined:
    Jan 6, 2015
    Messages:
    559
    Resources:
    0
    Resources:
    0
    Thanks.. :)
     
  10. Fang

    Fang

    Joined:
    Oct 3, 2014
    Messages:
    474
    Resources:
    2
    Models:
    1
    Maps:
    1
    Resources:
    2
    The story is very good. How is the progress?
     
  11. Arad MNK

    Arad MNK

    Joined:
    Dec 11, 2014
    Messages:
    1,889
    Resources:
    3
    Maps:
    2
    Spells:
    1
    Resources:
    3
    Nice story! Hope this turns out good ;)!
     
  12. [E]clipse

    [E]clipse

    Joined:
    Jan 6, 2015
    Messages:
    559
    Resources:
    0
    Resources:
    0
    thanks, it will turn out good.