the next smash hit horro movie?

[Tail Of The Wyrm]

it may be started by my mom and i.
the name is walking horror

 

[Daveman]

You and your mom are making it? lol
Night of the walking 12 year old goalie?

 

[Tail Of The Wyrm]

nah, 8 yearold killed by a guy with some weird mask that someone shoots holes into so it looks like a hockey mask.

no, were just making the script and sending it in, and i get to be an actor and voice guy if we do for garret, the undead killer 8 yearold, WOO

btw: if anyone wants to help. send me ur script. mine is good, though i skipped scenes cause my mom and i couldnt think of something to finisht the first one
FADE IN:
EXT. HOUSE
ED (40) looks up jealously at the house.
He sees a happy family, a father, a mother and a child, eating lunch on the patio.
This makes him jealous because his kids are such brats, and he’s divorced.
Ed is so jealous, that he starts to think up of a plan to kidnap the child, to make him his own.
Insert scenes
EXT. BACKYARD
A birthday party for an eight year old, is in full swing. Kids are running around playing, chasing each other, having fun.
GARRET (8years) shows up to the party in his invisible form. He is just a little transparent so the audience can see where he’s going. But the other kids can’t see him.
INT. HOUSE
The party goers are ready for bed, and zipped up in their sleeping bags.
They all go to sleep.
Garret slowly walks forward toward Alexander’s sleeping bag. He begins to quietly recite a poem to himself.
GARRET
I’m here just like you requested. Though you shouldn’t because I’ve been resurrected. All this time you thought I was your friend. Though all this time I’ve been your end. I’m going to kill you now, please do not ask me how. For it will waste much time. About the length of the ring or a chime.
Garret takes out a knife, rapidly stabs at Alexander’s heart.
THE NEXT MORNING
Shrieks of horror were ringing out from every corner of the house.
PARTY GOER 1
How could this happen?
PARTY GOER 2
Who killed him?
PARTY GOER 3
When last night did they kill him?
PARTY GOER 2
How old was the person who killed him?
PARTY GOER 3
Did the killer leave any clues?
PARTY GOER 1
I don’t think he did. He got away without waking up anyone in the night

 

[Daveman]

Dude wtf?
Whats this for? A wc3 cinematic?
Ur mom made this?

 

[Tail Of The Wyrm]

its a script were gonna send in and see if it'll become a movie

 

[Daveman]

And it was made by you and your mom?

 

[Astronaut]

And it was made by you and your mom?

it may be started by my mother and i.

you suck at being clever, go get shooted.

personally i think the hockey mask thing would be too much ripped off from Jason, nowadays they make new hockey masks. young kids in horror movies would be assosciated to revenants, not crazed out puppies

 

[Tail Of The Wyrm]

and i forgot to say, he isnt wearing any hockey mask

 

[Astronaut]

thats what the movie poster made me think, but whats on his face?

 

[Tail Of The Wyrm]

its a white mask that someone shoots holes that happen to appear in the shape of an unpsideown triangle making it like a hockey mask.



btw: send me a pic of you and ill make it a horror char

 

[Daveman]

And it was made by you and your mom?

it may be started by my mother and i.

you suck at being clever, go get shooted.

Ummm, i belive the word you were trying to spell was "Answer"

 

[Tail Of The Wyrm]

yes, the script was made by my mom and i

 

[SeaGull1723]

Please don't. Horror movies have just gone done the drain for me.

 

[harper]

Wow :shock: you murdered your own picture...lol... Great

 

[porndirector]

script sounds horrible

white mask wit holes in it, a ripoff of jason.

again, just sounds horrible

and horror movies these days dunt go anywhere, except for movies like the ring.

again just excruciating to read ur script.

go create an original script.....want a tip

get rid of the mask, it ruins the credibility of the film.

 

[Tail Of The Wyrm]

if my script sucks, then your head sucks until it blows up.

 

[Daveman]

if my script sucks, then your head sucks until it blows up.

No need for flaming, even if that was a HORRIBLE burn

 

[porndirector]

if my script sucks, then your head sucks until it blows up.

read your script again, and ask yourself. are people really going to see this movie? will they like the dude wit a white mask wit bullet holes in it?

cmon manz

lift ur game

if i saw a poster for this movie, i would think, kewl, a new jason movie, but then i walk closer, and realise its just a ripoffff of JASON.

so yer, be realistic dude, if this movie does get accepted(i doubt it will), you will just make a fast buck, if that's what you guys really want.

AND im wondering

what distributors have u sent dis script into?

 

[Daveman]

hey i understand that he shoots the bullet holes in, but how does the face turn so white?

 

[porndirector]

hey i understand that he shoots the bullet holes in, but how does the face turn so white?

his face aint white, itz a mask hez wearing.

and btw Tail Of The Wyrm, u sending script to distributors, or is going to be another low-budget indie film?

i may be pessimistic to you, but im trying to save you from embarassment, if you don't want my help, then, may god help you.

 

[aboriginal]

i agree with porndirector (but i don't want to be as harsh as him)

did u really just see a jason movie and copy it?

 

[harper]

That is some good talent there Besides, I cannot do what TOTW just did despite of my age...lol... *support to TOTW*

 

[aboriginal]

That is some good talent there Besides, I cannot do what TOTW just did despite of my age...lol... *support to TOTW*

i agree

but I still stick with my opinion that the jason lookalike will ruin the credibility of the film

unless you actually make it jason