Tears of Darkness

[Moderator]

11:58, 30th Oct 2008
Septimus: This campaign look promising, it is a shame to reject it. Unfortunately, the campaign is still at alpha status.

Set to review status for this moment, if there is no any update after 5 months. I would set this sources to rejection.

 

[Dr Super Good]

STOP FIGHTING

Callahan as of the current is ALLOWED to submit this as the campain rules are still in creation. Also this is a campain and not a map so map rules do not apply to this (unless a map in it is stolen in which the campain will be ignored as part of our anti stealing policy).

Please post constructive comments, like saying what needs to be improved or changed and such since currently you are spamming usless and unconstructive comments discouraging him to work on it which is not the point of this site.

Down rating is a BAD offence and soon (hope fully) will not occure and will be traceable or fixable by moderators so if it happens to your map DO NOT do it to other maps in revenge since that makes you equally as bad.

I recomend everyone stays calm and comments normally on usefull things and leaves the legality determination to moderators, since that is what we do, we moderate.

 

[hellmonja]

ok sorry i didn't really have much time to test it out but i think i played enough to give some decent feedback.

first of all, i really love the concept of strategy here. it's really something i haven't seen before: brief>strategy>action. of course i'm not a hardcore map critic so i'm saying this as a common player.

what you have is a very good concept and the very 1st map that really got me hooked bcoz of the story. It's still pretty rough on some edges but the idea is great, how the story unfolds is really cool and brings out a lot from the heroes right off the start. I also like how the heroes have these lights to quickly tell them apart from the crowd. plus, i really think default hero abilities would've been enough yet you even gave the heroes some triggered spells which is pretty cool. anyway here are some of the rough edges that you might want to improve:

- Cinematic - it is tedious when you play it the 2nd time around. the cinematic should cancel all together at pressing ESC.
- Typos - a lot of typos about. most notably you don't have spaces after periods on your cinematic dialogues.
- Terrain - the good thing about the terrain is that its functional. but it does need a bit of improving since it's rather, well, simple. yet i don't think this should be priority for now.

that's all i guess. i'm kinda sad to know you're not planning to finish this. at least make another campaign like such if it's not too much too ask. good job, here's an 8 for you...

 

[Callahan]

Thx for the review and for playing it.You make me want to finish it and improve it but i'm too busy =(...

 

[Nonas]

why do people upload unfinished campaigns?????????????????

 

[demon.spider]

so people can rate it and give feedback to the creator, so he/she knows that they are not just wasting time making a crappy campaign....

p.s i thought this was a very good campaign, i rate it when you finish it...watching the Cinematics over and over, can be a bit annoying, i dont mind the grammer mistakes...i cant wait 'till this is finished it was very fun to play...

 

[Dr. Sniz]

I'm not goicg to chak it if you didn't finished
but why the hell are you upload it unfinished?
dude, finish it

 

[[K40$]-Spectre]

Dude, do something about your English Dr. Sniz. And the reason why people upload unfinished Campaigns is that so they get feedback.

 

[deepstrasz]

Neat campaign screen.
For some reason I get a black screen when clicking the first mission (Orc I)