Suggestions Please, Preferably Constuctive.

[Konblade]

Here is the skin I'm workin on:

I've been busy with this one for awhile and need advice. I don't know what whould go with the theme of the skin, or how to add better details. Thanks.

 

[Formula1]

I hope thats not your skin...
If it is then it looks like it could be lizard man
Shade it better
Take out that blood
Add scales
I don't know if there is a nose or not but... take out those lines
Muscles could be done better (esp;ecially abs)
Make that top part dissap;ear

Also make the scales colorful so you dont notice the horrible black lines

 

[Konblade]

How's this?

 

[Formula1]

THe scales look better
THe outlines of the nose and cheek bones a bit deep still
The abs are still not life like
Teeth are a bit weird
the blood still looks like a bunch of running lines, how bout a sp;latter/smudge/little droplet
-You can always ad a special animation to his head latter

Is this a malitia model?
this may be a hard one to convert like what youre trying to do

 

[Saikann]

last pics arent working for me

Dude, just sit for 3 hours and do w/e you can think of to it. then show us, and we will answer. This is really too early for crits. You aren't even done with the base shading. The best stage for posting a wip (if one thinks posting a wip is good) would probably be the stage where everything, except the details.

Sooo, my advice: Work on it for some hours, and come back

 

[Metabee]

It's a Footy right?

 

[Saikann]

... of course not