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Skeleton Brute

Submitted by -Grendel
This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
hello fellow hive members, this is my first try on making a model. its called the Skeletal Brute, just a variation from the skeleton warriors. So yeah he has a spiked shield and a mace and carries its beloved coffin anywhere he goes.

feel free to leave any criticisms, as long as it is for the further improvement of the model


Again its my first try

minor updates:
~bigger mace
~some parts are now two-sided, now it will not appear invisible on some parts
~bigger head

update::

reduced filesize by half

Keywords:
golem, bone, boner, bony, skeleton, mace, coffin, undead, muscular skeleton, bony
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Skeleton Brute (Model)

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02:36, 6th Nov 2010 anarchianbedlam: Great looking model, cool concept, works ingame and could be useful. approved
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  1. 02:36, 6th Nov 2010
    anarchianbedlam: Great looking model, cool concept, works ingame and could be useful. approved
     
  2. -Peper-

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    Good Job!
    Btw, the crotch protector looks like a skirt...
     
  3. Jaret

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    OH my god! You uploaded this thing! it is so fucking awesome... no comment other than that.
     
  4. snowman990

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    OMG!looks good! yeah like peper said
     
  5. Zealon

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    Really good for your first model ^^

    Maybe you could just make the weapon a little bigger, it needs to look be more chunky and tankish.
     
  6. -Grendel

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    wow, i didn't knew i'll get such positive feedbacks on my first model ^_^
    thanks everyone. btw, he has a coffin on his back. not really visible in my screenshot

    EDIT: credits to -Peper- for the tutorial, and helping me fix the decay animation
     
    Last edited: Nov 4, 2010
  7. Jaret

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    I saw your construction thread ^^ But yes, I agree. You should make the weapon bigger. Where was you when the modeling contest #whatever - Titans occured? I bet This would win!
     
  8. -Grendel

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    thank you, i really appreciate it
     
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    pretty good :O
     
  10. Kuhneghetz

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    For once, a first try model that actually has good effort and looks nice. Big kudos to you for that.

    Though I do have some small criticisms for this model:
    - Many of the materials need to have their "two sided" checked because some parts of the model have invisible sides, especially the shoulderpads and the shield.
    - The wrap on the chest could use some more touchups, because it looks very stretchy.
    - Optional, but would nice if the texture for the head actually took the advantage if it's alpha channel. Just edit it's material and add the "transparency" effect.
     
  11. Jaret

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    Hey, you should do what DvO said, well, if you're lazy to do it yourself, here's the two-sided texture model. But, I gotta say, You did a hell of a job on this model. I love it. I don't know why, but this model makes me sooo happy ^^
     

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    Cool first model, I only give the tip of closing the holes, or making two sided materials 4/5
     
  13. Cavman

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    kinda reminds me of this
    [​IMG]

    As far as crits, what DvO said, and maybe make the head a little bigger. Looks a bit like a pin head atm.
     
  14. FriendlyHost1

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    looks sick but the skirt isn't very sexy, 8/10
     
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    well it nice after all.5/5 for me XD
     
    Last edited: Nov 5, 2010
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    the screenshot is not updated, but the weapon is bigger. check out my updates in the description :)
     
  17. Cavman

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    Nice. :D
     
  18. -Grendel

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    thanks ^_^
     
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    If the "coffin" isen't vissible, i think you should add another screenshot so people can see more than 50% of the model :D.
    I personally doesn't look at the model in the WE or anything like that so the screenshots is important :).
    But this is realy sick to be your first but the only thing that real... "wrong" with this model is the crotch :p. Good Luck In Your Modelling:)!
     
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