San Andreas Theme

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The terrain quite bad, it lack of the city environment. You should try improve it, just like dingo said. It is not at best.

The camera run through wall, it could probably been done at purpose to give it a better effect. So, I won't consider it as part of the error.

It does not amuse me except 1 scene, this probably due to the poor terrain. If you give it a better look, maybe I would watch it again.

You give credit to the sources you use and import it to the proper path. Your cinematic credit are quite unique cause usually people would just make the floating text goes up, but your doesn't.

This section earn full score.

Camera run through destructible/doodad a few times, but it seem to be done to give it a better effect. As for the special effect, it could use improvement.

File size are quite good since it below 3mb. As for the originality, I am not quite sure about it.

The packaging doesn't have much to look at, but the description could use a bit of improvement.

Well, it doesn't have any storyline at all. But, it certainly follow the theme of GTA.

As for music, I do not notice there is any music at all till I crank up my volume. And it seems to be ok since you used GTA music.

Quality are quite average to me and it seem to follow hiveworkshop rules

It is quite a short cinematic that probably been design to give people to edge of what is GTA all about. But, it failed to amuse me and probably a few other due to the poor terrain.

As for the fun part, there is 1 part seem to be funny for me. Who the hell is blazing idiot enough to drive their car straight down the cliff and rammed right into tree ?

This map seems to be decent to me, I would vote it 3 even if you request me to vote as user instead of mod.

[+] - Unique way of represent the credit.
[!] -
[-] - Terrain could use improvement

Awful: 1-10
Unacceptable : 11-30
Lacking : 31-49
Useful : 50-69
Recommend : 70-90
Highly Recommend : 91-100
Director Cut : 101-105
Sub-Zero : 106+

1) Terrain - 3
2) Error - 9
3) Replay Value & Fun factor - 1
4) Credit & Import Material - 10
5) Camera & Special Effect - 6
6) File Size & Originality - 7
7) Packaging & Description/Information/Detail - 7
8) Storyline & Theme - 5
9) Music & Sound - 3
10) Quality & Hiveworkshop Rules - 5

Score - 56/100
Moderator Rating - 3/5
User Rating - 3/5
Condition - Average
Status - Approve
Review - 1

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[xxdingo93xx]

One word - lol.

Terrain was not the best, models although were funny ;P I give 4/5

 

[TrOiA]

Wtf - =x

 

[Septimus]

This map had been examined by Alexis Septimus. If you think this map review is not accurate or require another review, feel free to contact Alexis Septimus. But, map would only be review again for second time and also for the last time unless under certain circumstances. It would be selfish to request constantly a mod/admin to keep review your map as there is many other maps waiting for approval as well.

However, if you still insist of another review after it had been review for second time. Feel free to contact other admin.

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The terrain quite bad, it lack of the city environment. You should try improve it, just like dingo said. It is not at best.

The camera run through wall, it could probably been done at purpose to give it a better effect. So, I won't consider it as part of the error.

It does not amuse me except 1 scene, this probably due to the poor terrain. If you give it a better look, maybe I would watch it again.

You give credit to the sources you use and import it to the proper path. Your cinematic credit are quite unique cause usually people would just make the floating text goes up, but your doesn't.

This section earn full score.

Camera run through destructible/doodad a few times, but it seem to be done to give it a better effect. As for the special effect, it could use improvement.

File size are quite good since it below 3mb. As for the originality, I am not quite sure about it.

The packaging doesn't have much to look at, but the description could use a bit of improvement.

Well, it doesn't have any storyline at all. But, it certainly follow the theme of GTA.

As for music, I do not notice there is any music at all till I crank up my volume. And it seems to be ok since you used GTA music.

Quality are quite average to me and it seem to follow hiveworkshop rules

It is quite a short cinematic that probably been design to give people to edge of what is GTA all about. But, it failed to amuse me and probably a few other due to the poor terrain.

As for the fun part, there is 1 part seem to be funny for me. Who the hell is blazing idiot enough to drive their car straight down the cliff and rammed right into tree ?

This map seems to be decent to me, I would vote it 3 even if you request me to vote as user instead of mod.

[+] - Unique way of represent the credit.
[!] -
[-] - Terrain could use improvement

Awful: 1-10
Unacceptable : 11-30
Lacking : 31-49
Useful : 50-69
Recommend : 70-90
Highly Recommend : 91-100
Director Cut : 101-105
Sub-Zero : 106+

1) Terrain - 3
2) Error - 9
3) Replay Value & Fun factor - 1
4) Credit & Import Material - 10
5) Camera & Special Effect - 6
6) File Size & Originality - 7
7) Packaging & Description/Information/Detail - 7
8) Storyline & Theme - 5
9) Music & Sound - 3
10) Quality & Hiveworkshop Rules - 5

Score - 56/100
Moderator Rating - 3/5
User Rating - 3/5
Condition - Average
Status - Approve
Review - 1

The map might not be fully tested, if any user of the map found bug/error or anything else. Feel free to contact Alexis Septimus by clicking this

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[Endel4]

ha, i'm making a map like this, but diferrent, it's like GTA, where you conquer territories (businesses) and then tell them what type of business they are, which gives you income every 6 minutes, each race has its own unique business, with the basic three (harem, assassination, and drugs)

my signature makes no sense

 

[dragor89]

dude then ur map is gona be like loap

 

[xDeathKnightx]

wth after i finished watching this i opened up my map in WEU and all the custom objects were purple sqaures and they were called 1...

 

[night...fade]

i could not stop lauthuing when the car fall from the cliff XDDD
great cinematic +rep

 

[TheForsaken]

at the begining i tough it will gonna be a black image and the theme. but the cinematic was great

 

[deepstrasz]

2.5/5.
Looks like a cheap action movie trailer.