[Picture] Arrival at the wetlands After a week of sailing and staring at old maps land finally ca

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Arrival at the wetlands

After a week of sailing and staring at old maps land finally came into sight, their destination was reached. The strongholds they would erect on this land would be symbols of destruction and fear, they would lay low for some time and then they would appear, mighty and strong...
 

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Dude, seriously, could you please be more careful in descriptions? Seriously, its not chat, type slowly and throughroughly.
Wetlands are capitalized, After is beginning of a sentance, capitalize too, The strongholds, same.
Come on, description is half of the pic and you ruin it =/
 
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oO what? they aren't on straight lines at all! and all... grammar nazi... xD but now honestly there weren't that many mistakes.
 
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