edit his face, its still a human face with a red thing stamped on his face, dont just recolor his face and consider it done. cape is crap, you tried to put too much things in it, keep it definated and simple. if you'd like to give it a worn-out look, dont try to do micro-details, make it global. no skins made by blizzard features small details, and its perfect like this. those red/black-red lines are shit, it just doesnt look good.