My First Terrain - Mushroom Planet

Do You Like this Terrain?

  • 1 (Terrible)

    Votes: 1 4.3%
  • 2 (Bad)

    Votes: 6 26.1%
  • 3 (Ok)

    Votes: 12 52.2%
  • 4 (Good)

    Votes: 2 8.7%
  • 5 (Great)

    Votes: 2 8.7%

  • Total voters
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Here it is.. Hopefully you like it :hohum:
 

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It could use alot of work. Its kind of plain generic terrain. Lacks an atmosphere and is mostly overhead shots. You can see the edge of the terrain in one shot. Lastly your terrain lacks a focus, all of your screenshots just sort of display some random area full of random terrain. If this is meant to be playable that might be desirable but cinematicaly it dosen't look good.
 
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Very good terrain meow, I can tell u put a lot of work, but just as Dun said, it does need a bit more atmosphere

Also, nice texture variation, but there are some parts where it is a bit too drastic.
 
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Not bad. Some good tile variation. I've seen better mushroom planets though. One I remember had giant mushrooms with I thought was cool.

I agree with DungeonM. It seems a bit random. Looks like it could be playable, but I'm guessing it isn't.
 
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Good tilevariation, but the placement of your doodads look random and cluttered. The terrain looks very busy. Its not a great terrain, nor is it terrible. However, it is "OK" so that is what I voted. Keep on terraining! Its always good to improve your terrains too, even if they're not for a real playable map. :grin:

~Craka_J
 
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Good tilevariation, but the placement of your doodads look random and cluttered. The terrain looks very busy. Its not a great terrain, nor is it terrible. However, it is "OK" so that is what I voted. Keep on terraining! Its always good to improve your terrains too, even if they're not for a real playable map. :grin:

~Craka_J
Alright! That is what I will do!

Too random, bad choice of doodads, bad camera angle, good tile variation. Overall not too great, but there's always room for improvement.

Alright, thanks for the info
 
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There's nothing going for this terrain, its just a bunch of trees and mushrooms. And while others said the tile variation was good I disagree. Throwing down a bunch of random tiles dosen't make a good terrain. Even things in nature aren't that random, at least most of the time.

I disagree with your disagreement. I think tile variation can look fine random. I still sometimes just splotch it around.
 
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Pretty good for a first terrain :D The tile variation is good but the doodads sorta seem jumbled and random. The terrain just needs to be a bit less... messy... But good job :D
 
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I mean you should have something in focus, like a road in middle, a waterfall, a cool mix with terrain or doodads, while around it there is random doodads and stuff.
Ah, now I understand, next time I make terrain I'll try to keep that in mind. :grin: :thumbs_up:
I didn't say the tile variation was bad, it's pretty good, i was talking about the random doodad placement.
Thank you for that comment than.
 
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