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Let the People Speak ON TTW3d-d

What arce Would you Like?

  • Human (cult of somekind or guild) Tell in a post

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Druids ( of what clan and of what race(s) tell in post

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • An Addon to A Race COmpletely Specify in A Post

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    10
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The Tribe Wars (TTW)Ok First off the map is a stradegy war in other words a alternate melee features loads of stuff its quality is a (4/10) if you ask myself (the Creator) but it is one of my first maps and is still updates nearly daily and has been so for the last 2 - 8 months and ive had numerous emails about races they would like into the map ive put in alot of them mainly (human undead ghosts Animal Orges nightelfs) but still geting emails nearly every day about diffrent races and i keep sending back think of logic here well now im seting this poll up too get votes on diffrent races they would likei n the map and yes teh maps still not finished its a D-D A (Double Demo) Meaning It was once Full but then later was worked on and Figured it wasnt complete BEcouse im still working on a few newer Vs of it oh and you can dl it here (http://www.hiveworkshop.com/resources_new/maps/4258/) Anyways Votes on your race youd like And Tell me how youde like me too add that race now befor you post play the map online or singlep layer fight around abit and you tell me the race and how youd liejk it added Exaple:Venomous Spiders \creep (Description) way youde like it too be added) like if youd like it as a creep and a alliance and if its an alliance ide put it in teh treaty house a signing and a worker added then make a unique techtree and yes ill let you guys tell me how youd like it in every manner:infl_thumbs_up: so set up your votes! and play the map atleast once before voteing Oh and sorry for all of the txt mess ups my keyboards sticky at this time and its race NOT ARCE!
Ive Began Work On A Custom Song Im Usering my GUitar MY Friends Are Hel;ping Violin And One Got His Sister Too Do SOem Minor VOcals it Will Be A Sympophy Of over 8 Instruments It Will Fit Nicely It Will Be Done At The End of The Day And Added In ther NExt Update!!!
 
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You Can Now Download The SOng Only JUst Too See The Work




:NOTE: the song me andm y friends have amde here is a remake of The NEwgroudns Version By The original Owner i HAve Had Full Permision too Mak THis Newly Remade Version The Original Song HAs Full Credit Too The original Owner But The Song Here you can dl and the one in the map is a remade version too see if we could play it up too the same as the original band could we did and we added some extra bassand a few smaller tweaks too amke it our own!:NOTE:
 

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You Can Now Download The SOng Only JUst Too See The Work




:NOTE: the song me andm y friends have amde here is a remake of The NEwgroudns Version By The original Owner i HAve Had Full Permision too Mak THis Newly Remade Version The Original Song HAs Full Credit Too The original Owner But The Song Here you can dl and the one in the map is a remade version too see if we could play it up too the same as the original band could we did and we added some extra bassand a few smaller tweaks too amke it our own!:NOTE:
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Yes The Units Dont At All HAve Shadows THis Decreases Lag In LArge Scale Battles by 55% And The Shadows I Had For them looked Very BAd ANyways And Well I keep Updateign It Everyday LOl ANd I Add About A Unit A Day Fix SOme Bugs I Get From PLayers LIke Everyother Map Maker WOuld And There Is A Demon Race From Hell Doh HAvent You Played The Map The Ragnarous Units Are FromHell And The Druid Is Evil Also But WhatEver Ill Add the Vote Too SOmething LOl :grin: Thanks For The Replys guys! And I MAy Add Some Small Shadowing For Quality But It MAy or May not Increase Lagg But Alot Of People Are gonna STart Masing Everything will Lagg Ya Know? Then i get spamed with fricken messages On Lagg Well Thx For Posts Guys!
 
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What should be done

Your map lacks polish. I gave it a run and was quite unimpressed. First of all, the run on sentences need to end. Microsoft word can identify problem sentences for you. A good rule of thumb is read it aloud and pause for one second for every comma, and three seconds for every period. If it sounds weird, it needs fixing.

You also have some abilities on the map that are not usable because their pre-requisite are not available. (the sellable shop items pop into my mind as a huge example)

Also, the red/Yellow area of the map needs SERIOUS work. Only two of the several ramps are functional.

My vote for what race to add to your map is, "polish", not to be confused with "Polish", which is a citizen of the Republic of Poland, but "polish", implying cleaning up your map.
 
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His post wasn't offensive, he was giving critics,while at the same time giving you advice, which should not be offending, but helpful.
If you're still offended by a post such as this one, you should better not post a map at all because apparently you can't stand critics...
Whether or not you have reasons why your map is unpolished like it is now does NOT matter. The only thing that matters is that you face that fact and either work on it or don't post posts like this one. Above that, I wouldn't be surprised if your post gets you neg. repped.
Again, you should learn to make proper sentences. Do not capitalise all words ecept for "I" (which you, surprisingly, don't capitalise), and use interpunction, will you? Thank you.
 
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Comments from someone who has been Blizzard Map Editing for OVER 10 YEARS!!!

I FOund Your Post A Bit offensive but you should of researched a bit mroe instead of shooting your mouth off thinking of what you think becouse 1 this was one of my first maps 2it wasnt really sopose to be impressive it was sopose to inspire otheres to show it doesnt take fancy smancy things like jass or even triggers all together! to make an ok eceptional map ( not saying ok but enough that someone will enjoy it) and i msorry its not "POILISHED" like your window but it was my first map when i first got into the editor which was wayyyyyy back when Frozen throne just came out and i just set out the first original and i did small things over and over untill it came up ok and if i had the time i would polish it but i am working on a ORPG but really im thinking of quiting working on wc3 i have millions of maps ive made but never really submited them cus i dont wanna overshine maps that deserve more and i just dont like your attitude towards a 5 year old map and i see you are new aug 2007 your join date and well before you start shooting your damn mouth off learn to research a map before you start preaching liek your above me its an old map that ive neglected somewhat SO LEARN TO RESEARCH! A! MAP!!! BEFORE! YOU! SHOOT! YOUR! MOUTH! OFF! YOU! JERK! :angry:


Spelling mistakes like this are rampant in your map. This is an example of lack of polish, which you defend.

1 this was one of my first maps 2it wasnt really sopose to be impressive it was sopose to inspire otheres to show it doesnt take fancy smancy things like jass or even triggers all together!

And THIS is why I spent my time and effort to critique it. Your thread topic plus the request for us to play your map before voting had me look at it. I found several problems that does the OPPOSITE of encourage new mapmakers. You have bugs in your terrain, spelling errors rampant, run-on sentences, abilities in the map that require prerequisites that aren't in the map, countless other problems. These together give non-jass users a bad name, because THIS is an example of a Non-jass map. Let's explain it this way, My firemount map, which I feel is so far from completion that I won't let anyone touch yet, is better polished then your map. Granted, it uses triggers pretty heavily, however, it's a different kind of game then yours. Yours has so much wasted potential, I loved how the gameplay generally went, but the gameplay was COMPLETELY overridden by lack of polish.

and if i had the time i would polish it
This is a serious problem to me. This map to the best of my knowledge is not in a competition, so I do not see why it had to be rushed out the door. If you did not have time to polish it, you should not have released it yet.

but really im thinking of quiting working on wc3 i have millions of maps ive made but never really submited them cus i dont wanna overshine maps that deserve more
With your attitude, I strongly recommend you do quit wc3 mapping. Critiques are the only thing that makes mapmakers and individual maps better. You seem to be unable to take a serious critique of your maps, so you need to get out of the game.

i just dont like your attitude towards a 5 year old map and i see you are new aug 2007 your join date and well before you start shooting your damn mouth off learn to research a map before you start preaching liek your above me

Join dates do not accurately represent the entry to someone into map making. I've been making maps since warcraft 2. I had Warcraft 3 map editor open before I even opened the game. One thing I have never done though, is got angry for someone telling me that my map needs work. I've snarled at people who only says "Your map sucks" and takes off without saying what sucked about it so I could fix it, but when someone tells me "Fix your run-on sentences", I have always taken a day out of my busy schedule and fixed it.

well before you start shooting your damn mouth off learn to research a map before you start preaching liek your above me
Your accusation of me not researching a map is somewhat correct, I didn't research your map at all. All I did was what I was asked to do, test the map and give you my opinion of what you need to do to make the map better. Researching a map is not required for me to critique it. However, I believe that you were trying to say,
"Learn how to examine a map before you start shooting your damn mouth off"
For that statement to have any validity, what I said must be false.
Is my statement that the ramps in the red/yellow area false? That's a 10 minute fix.
How about my statement about the run-on sentences? That's a major fix, will probably take you a day.
How about my statement about some stuff having prerequisites that cannot be matched? That's another major fix that will probably take you a day.

If ANY of those 3 claims I made are wrong, Then you need to give me the REAL link to your map, because the map I played had those as hindrances to my ability to enjoy playing the map, making it another example of someone who releases a map without testing it.

I've done my best to try to refrain from personal attacks in this reply, but ray12342, You've got my goat with your reply to my critique, and I want it back.

Your join date here is Nov 2006. http://www.warboards.org/member.php?u=7813
2004. The start date of Firemount, So bite me about my "Lack of Experience"
 
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"but really im thinking of quiting working on wc3 i have millions of maps ive made but never really submited them cus i dont wanna overshine maps that deserve more"

LOL -- If this maps sucks what makes you think your other one's will out shine other people maps? Also triggers arent fancy shmancy at all -- good maps need triggers (at least custom ones) maps that dotn have triggers means that the creator (a) Is new to mapping and isnt putting triggers in because he simply can't or (b) The creator is lazy. And if a 5 yearold maps still sucks is uggest you give up on it. Also if you youself only give your map a 4/10 it either means you have low self esteem, your way to modest, or your bad at mapping. I think its 1 and 2. Peace.
 
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still sucks is uggest you give up on it. Also if you youself only give your map a 4/10 it either means you have low self esteem, your way to modest, or your bad at mapping. I think its 1 and 2. Peace.[/quote] ya you got me right its 1 and 2 and i am a pretty lazy person nice job hiting the mark....:thumbs_up:
 
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I Never Ment to take your goat and im sorry if i have offended you but your lack of research sent me into a blinded rage and i never ment your join date as a meaning of your experience a day old user could or may not have more experience than a 50 year old user now heres your goat back and a cow bell on its neck and im sorry for any spelling errors and yes this versios terrain and everything is a bit bugged ive somewhat neglected old maps i just sorta left it be for too long and i started a non bugged project everything ive done on my maps never seem to last....
 
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Quality Before Quantity!

I Never Ment to take your goat and im sorry if i have offended you but your lack of research sent me into a blinded rage
Lack of research? Sure, I am Guilty there, but what you clearly meant is my "Lack of examining the map"
That is pure dross and bullcrap. I examined your map in depth. I found numerous problems with it, and pointed out to you the most problematical areas.

and i never ment your join date as a meaning of your experience a day old user could or may not have more experience than a 50 year old user
I just love using quotes.
i just dont like your attitude towards a 5 year old map and i see you are new aug 2007 your join date
Did you miss that? To me that is pure elitism. I should leave a map alone because it is five years old, and I should also leave a map alone because I am new with an august 2007 join date. That doesn't work.


now heres your goat back and a cow bell on its neck and im sorry for any spelling errors and yes this versios terrain and everything is a bit bugged ive somewhat neglected old maps i just sorta left it be for too long and i started a non bugged project everything ive done on my maps never seem to last....

Here's another quote, attached with a date.
ray12342 8/8/2007 said:
but it is one of my first maps and is still updates nearly daily and has been so for the last 2 - 8 months
nyways Votes on your race youd like And Tell me how youde like me too add that race now befor you post play the map online or singlep layer fight around abit and you tell me the race and how youd liejk it added Exaple:Venomous Spiders \creep (Description) way youde like it too be added) like if youd like it as a creep and a alliance and if its an alliance ide put it in teh treaty house a signing and a worker added then make a unique techtree and yes ill let you guys tell me how youd like it in every manner so set up your votes! and play the map atleast once before voteing Oh and sorry for all of the txt mess ups my keyboards sticky at this time and its race NOT ARCE!
I just took the whole thing for the second part because it was important to bring it in context. This clearly is an invitation for players to examine your map and determine what race they want in future versions of your map. That states clearly you have the intention to update your map. I took this to heart, knowing how to EXAMINE a map very well, and did so. After finding the map almost unplayable because of numerous bugs and poor map editing techniques, I came back to inform you to put your effort into adding a little polish to the map, and then working on new content.

Now, to clarify something that is really annoying me about you....

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/Research
http://dictionary.reference.com/ said:
re·search /rɪˈsɜrtʃ, ˈrisɜrtʃ/ Pronunciation Key - Show Spelled Pronunciation[ri-surch, ree-surch] Pronunciation Key - Show IPA Pronunciation
–noun
1. diligent and systematic inquiry or investigation into a subject in order to discover or revise facts, theories, applications, etc.: recent research in medicine.
2. a particular instance or piece of research.
–verb (used without object)
3. to make researches; investigate carefully.
–verb (used with object)
4. to make an extensive investigation into: to research a matter thoroughly.

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/Examine
http://dictionary.reference.com/ said:
ex·am·ine /ɪgˈzæmɪn/ Pronunciation Key - Show Spelled Pronunciation[ig-zam-in] Pronunciation Key - Show IPA Pronunciation
–verb (used with object), -ined, -in·ing.
1. to inspect or scrutinize carefully: to examine a prospective purchase.
2. to observe, test, or investigate (a person's body or any part of it), esp. in order to evaluate general health or determine the cause of illness.
3. to inquire into or investigate: to examine one's motives.
4. to test the knowledge, reactions, or qualifications of (a pupil, candidate, etc.), as by questions or assigning tasks.
5. to subject to legal inquisition; put to question in regard to conduct or to knowledge of facts; interrogate: to examine a witness; to examine a suspect.

Here is an example of the difference.

You RESEARCH a new virus, but you EXAMINE a patient to discover a virus.
you RESEARCH the source of a particular map bug, but you EXAMINE the map to find the bug.

I have never been asked to research your map, however, I have received an open invitation to examine it in the form displayed below, quoted from you again, ray12342.
Anyways Votes on your race youd like And Tell me how youde like me too add that race now befor you post play the map online or singlep layer

Sure, I didn't follow that particular guideline, instead I did what any self-respecting map maker would want and provided you a critique, allowing you to identify trouble spots and fix them as quickly as possible. If you ask me to, I can examine your map in depth and identify a lot more problems, however, I only cared enough to put fourth just enough effort that it wasn't an affront to my reputation as a hoster of decent games for me to host it again. Right now, ray12342, I cannot host your map again because doing so creates a stain on my reputation that I will not tolerate.

QUALITY BEFORE QUANTITY!
 
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Because I was far to lazy to read any of that massive post I'll just nodd my head in agrial.

**Nodds head in Agrial**

P.S. (I clearly don't know how to spell agrial.)
 
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