Kingdom of Fantasy

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03:21, 14th Aug 2008
Septimus:

Next time, do not rush when it cames to map making.

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/781100-post2.html

 

[Septimus]

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1) Terrain - Average (3)
2) Ingenuity -
3) Minor Error -
4) Replay Value -
5) Fun factor/gameplay - Bad (2)
6) Use of imported material - Average (2)
7) Single player -
8) AI support -
9) Camera - Bad (2)
10) Originality -
11) File Size - Average (3)
12) Balancing -
13) Packaging - Average (3)
14) Credits - Good (4)
15) Storyline - Average (3)
16) Theme - Average (3)
17) Protection - Average (3)
18) Quality - Average (3)
19) Description/Information - Good (4)
20) Hiveworkshop rules & regulation - Excellent (5)

Total Accumulation Point : 50/65 + (-14) (Review) = 36

[+] - Good battle scenario
[!] -
[-] - Dialog conversation goes too fast
[-] - Terrain at battle scenario look rather empty
[-] - Camera movement too quick at certain point

Review : The battle scenario is rather impressive, which is quite nice.

However, there is several downside of this cinematic. Such as being mention above this review.

And this map author certainly develop this map in such a rush, cause this is the 3rd time he summit this map and I had reject his previous map cause he either did a dumb mistake by not enable cinematic mode (1st rejection of this map) or did not have ending (2nd rejection of this map)

This author certainly disappoint me as I have seen a few gallery of his terrain which look rather impressive to me, but as for the terrain at this map. It look rather decent and some part of it look rather bland such as the battle scenario.

Map certainly require several improvement at it, and I would not going to review it again cause I already review it for 3 times.

Another -14 points for this map.

Score - 36/100
Rating - 2/5
Condition - Good
Status - Approve
Review - 3

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[Ribenamania]

And this map author certainly develop this map in such a rush, cause this is the 3rd time he summit this map and I had reject his previous map cause he either did a dumb mistake by not enable cinematic mode (1st rejection of this map) or did not have ending (2nd rejection of this map)

Well , actually ... I'm not missing those parts .. it's just some trigger problem..

Review : The battle scenario is rather impressive, which is quite nice.

Thanks !
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EDIT : I admit the first time I upload , I did not try in game .. but second time I do .. It stucked there because I made the trigger : Wait until ((..........))
And I make that unit random point .. so it works sometimes , and won't work sometimes .. So .. I fixed it and upload again ^^

 

[creyzi4zb12]

I give this a 4/5....mainly because the terrain was rather empty....
I usually give 5/5 to cinematic maps only because of their terrain...Terrain has huge effects on a cinematic...
I think the terrain was fairly made...It was good...but it still had plenty of room for improvement.

 

[Restor]

lol, that judging is nonsense

so, if I have "perfect" credits like this cinematic and totaly flat terrain, I got 5 points, and if have totaly awesome terrain and no credits, it is the same quality map ... LOL

well, 4/5 for what? did somebody see what I didnt? 1/5 from me

 

[ThePanda]

Good preview ;D

 

[creyzi4zb12]

lol, that judging is nonsense

so, if I have "perfect" credits like this cinematic and totaly flat terrain, I got 5 points, and if have totaly awesome terrain and no credits, it is the same quality map ... LOL

well, 4/5 for what? did somebody see what I didnt? 1/5 from me

ummmm.....yes....If it has awesome terrain and sucking credits I'd give it a 4 or 5.

The credits was good and some of the effects was pretty good, which is why I give this a 4/5 instead of 3/5.....
And as a judge I am very particular with terraining. That's how I do it, yes you are correct.

 

[shaun]

some good scenes some bad scenes

hiveworkshop standard i'd say so it s a 3/5 (2/5 if i was honest)

no further explaination since septimus already did it;

but it's definitly not more than 3/5

 

[defskull]

Kingdom of Fantasy ?
More like... Kingdom of Hearts !!!
Sora?!

 

[deepstrasz]

2/5.
Mostly FX&visuals.