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[lnfernal]

Can someone try to add a bit flow and correct mistakes to this descirption?

In order to be an Abomination Spirit an Abomination has to be revived from the dead. The revival is called by necromancers and will only be used on the most elite Abominations.
Even after revival they are still ghost-like, which means they are nearly immune to any kind of damage against them. But there are cons too. The Abomination Spirits are not able to touch objects and use cleaver and hook. Instead they are now enchanted with shadow and spiritual powers to give them ability to fight and take advantage of their thirst for revenge. But now there are no revenge in the world that could override their will for avange of their brothers that were killed and kept as prisoner by the goblins.

 

[Bloody_Turds]

aboms kept in prison by the goblins? wow seriously...
you are talking about the undead unit right? the one made of other units...

 

[lnfernal]

Yes.

 

[Bloody_Turds]

Aside from the logic flaw, what is this gonna be for, so we know how to write it, a tooltip? a cinimatic? ect..

is this for a spell on the necromancer?

is it the "Ghost" abominations tooltip?

or is it a compleetly seperate storyline, for something else