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HeroNagaSeawitch.blp

Submitted by -Grendel
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
The fourth skin on my pack, it's called Purity,


I think she looks cute XD





dont edit w/o my permission





changelog:


1.) added more color variations on her body
2.)i also noticed some parts lack highlighting, so i added highlights on them


Keywords:
medusa, pure, demon, warden, hell
Contents

Purity - The Warden of Hell (Texture)

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15:00, 15th Apr 2011 shiiK: Cleaning up skins that have been rejected (until updated) for more than a month - moving to rejected permanently due lack of updates since last moderation. No new review of the skin has been made. If you feel that this...
  1. 15:00, 15th Apr 2011
    shiiK: Cleaning up skins that have been rejected (until updated) for more than a month - moving to rejected permanently due lack of updates since last moderation. No new review of the skin has been made. If you feel that this decission is wrong, or if you want to update the skin, please reply to this PM and I'll work it out for you. As this is a preset message, and I'm just picking up each and every skin in the category, I want to apologize beforehand if this clutters your inbox.

    10:41, 16th Apr 2010
    Dentothor: I suggest that you define the armor's colour tone from the units skin/clothing colour tone. Because at this point it is a bit confusing to look at.

    No changes made, Rejected until updated.
     
  2. Apheraz Lucent

    Apheraz Lucent

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    Goodies:
    1. Its clear as a day that its Fallen Naga Archer.
    2. Flesh wounds and bones are done precisely and on interesting way.
    3. Originality - I saw no fallen Nagas like this one

    Bad Stuffz:
    1.Too monotone - only severe colors all over her. I know that she needs to be same colored, but, for an example, add some color or create something that will attract attention and draw it against the bad parts.
    2. Face is kinda weird... Dunno know why - try adding red eyes or white - the black ones look like she has holes in head
    3. Looks kinda like a mummy - you can fix it by adding armor or making colors a bit opposite...

    All in all - this is a good skin - I can't find a use of it in my map but it is quite good for me. Rating of 4/5 (reasons above) until u change it a bit... And, of course, +rep ;)
     
  3. Darkmoon Hero

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    It's really cool what you did with the head and the face, but the body's color is just so monotone. Add more color variation. Otherwise, great skin.
     
  4. L_Lawliet

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    hmm.. quite ok.. :) but i love the blood parts on your submissions.
     
  5. -Grendel

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    i tried many color variations in this, it just went f****ed up after i made it, this color only made it look good
     
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    Oh Mah Gawd.....She looks like Rochelle in L4D2. BTW It looks great just like Darkmoon said add more color variations. And why was she called purity if she's an undead hero oor something?
     
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    Hmhmm..The body looks a bit boring maybe try to add some armour of somekind, i dunno. Otherwise it looks great
     
  8. -Grendel

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    haha, she looks like rochelle...XD

    btw, she is named "Purity" coz i based her on the third boss of Akuji the Heartless,



    Dont worry updates will be coming before you can even say the word "shmuckazuckamagamagahambaggah"
     
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    Now that's scary. Good job.
     
  10. Misha

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    Very nice.. Not sure though what would make it a bit more contrasted... o_O
     
  11. -Grendel

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    is it pale in color?
     
  12. Misha

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    no, color is ok.. naw.. nevermind.

    it looks fine enough :]
     
  13. Apheraz Lucent

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    Dont be stupid

    ITS NOT the Darkmoon who said that - my comment is first T.T
     
  14. Apheraz Lucent

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    hm...

    I said that adding small details such an rotten wooden bow that is different or a flash of red light on eyes could be interesting and would distract attention from the bad parts of the skin.
     
  15. Apheraz Lucent

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    Omg

    ALL THAT YOU'VE SAID to add armor, make more colors and etc,

    READ PLEASE - It's all written in my first post so please don't doublepost what has already been posted by someone else... Y.Y
     
  16. Mr.Goblin

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    Omg dude... that arm/tail concept is just brilliant!

    really nice texture.. although a few more lightning and shadows would incress it.

    and I also suggest you to change the concept of her face.. it's just the same thing as your other textures.

    here's a quick sketch example.
    Nouveau Image bitmap (3) copy.jpg

    that's just an idea tought.. do what ever you want with it.

    Good luck.
     
  17. -Grendel

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    ok, i'll try to change her face, thanks 4 the comment^^


    too bad her headress and her bow uses the same texture

    EDIT: I need comments!! how can i improve it!!
     
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  18. Apheraz Lucent

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    Improve urself by editing, not double posting :p
     
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    great skin as usual