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Grandesia - The Awakening Of Vendemes(Construction Tread)

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Grandesia
The Awakening Of Vendemes

This is a free form DM controlled RP, meaning you can alter the story genre anyway u want, and control the other person's characters according to your story, with a DM taking care. There are only one Dungeon Masters here and fellow role players, that includes me. This is my first time making an RP, so I hope that this does not fails too much, and in another way, please remind me if I made any mistakes, I will correct them immediately. Thanks and enjoy my RP ,Grandesia - The Awakening of Vendemes!

Story
Grandesia is the country where all legendary Hunters are born. Hunters are people who, travels all around the world, doing things according to their profession, as 'Hunter' is just a title for a someone who have graduated from their respective schools. Every 5 year, the government holds the Hunter recognition exam, where you can take it to instead of working your way to the famous Hunter Expedition, where all the Hunters does hugely reward quests which is as hard as hell, you can take the exam to skip that part and go straight to the Hunter Expedition, but it is also warned that the exam will be very hard, so hard that many candidates who took the exam, failed and died. Though that, many spectators still come to watch amazing Hunters fight their way through the exams and finishes it. Little did they know, an evil force is awakening from its deep slumber.


Info & Rules

These are the rules that I have set in my RP, but likewise, please refer to the Unwritten RP Rules before entering.
There aren't hundreds or thousands of harsh rules, but I would the rules to be followed without questioned.

1 . Do NOT god-mod, as that will make the story lame. For example,Ovan hits the evil god Bersilen, he died, everyone is happily ever after. It should go like this
: Ovan hits Bersilen, he blocks it with his blade. Even if you want to post something like that, please make as if your character failed, and got hitted back instead.

2 . You are NOT allowed to double post, once your story is posted, wait till someone post something.

3 . You can change the story's genre, it doesn't matter in my RP, if you think the story needs some romance? Add some romantic scenes in it. Think the story needs some action? Find someone to fight with your character. Or you just want some plain speech, just post someone chatting histories or anything.

4 . Everyone in this RP is equally same. My characters doesn't have to be the most important person in the RP. That means you can also use other people's character in any sort of way (of course, use some common sense :D). BUT, do not use this advantage to kill your most hated fellow player's character, simply just because you disrespect him. Everyone who is participating is contributing to the story, including him.

5 . You can make a picture for your character and post it here, on the construction thread.

And last but not least, enjoy your stay here!


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Races

Here is the list of races.

Humans boast the largest population race in Grandesia. Their technology proves to be a huge advantage of military might and are well-known for their gross experiments in order to create such high-tech weapons. Able to adept into almost any situations, they have been a balanced race even since the start of civilization. The only disadvantage the human race has is being the race that can be easily crushed because of untrained civilians, and soldiers who drop their guns and run away.



Ranking second in population, the Elves are intelligent humanoid beings that lives in deep forests. They are believed to be wise races, as they have vast knowledge in magics. Standing side by side with the humans, they have helped along the humans in their researches in military technologies.



Greenskins who held their heads up high, and is always recklessly charging into battles. They have despised humans for their reign over military might, and some even plotted to steal their technologies. But all in all, they are still a race to be feared in terms of pure strength.



Dragons that took the from of a humans, they have the powers of dragons that is believed to be long extincted. These race have lived on Grandesia for almost a few thousands years, and yet still living on as the fifth largest population in Grandesia. They are like orcs, they love battles as if its their job, but they still have the heart to protect their loved ones around them.



Although short in height, their technology is almost as advanced as the humans, except they are more of base defenses than weapons. They are a proud race, able to stand still even when defeated miserably in battles, they never give up, always protecting the race with their defensive technologies. Their only disadvantage is being short, and is always angered when someone tells them that they are 'short'.



Tiny humans that is said to be the guardian of a human, they lived in peace with all the race, except the their larger 'cousins', the dragonians. They are the total opposite of the dragonian race. They are more of battling with morals rather than fighting it off with fists, unlike their 'cousins'. Even though peaceful, they refused to move on with technologies, and instead remain unchanged from the start of their race. That is the faeries weakness.



Intelligent races with sneaky and nimble bodies. Their technology has reached the same level as the dwarves, but a little bit more less advance. Though smart, their sneaky personalities proved to be a little bit untrustworthy. But, you can always count on them whenever you need help with technologies stuff, but always expect that they will ask for something in return, and that is what makes them both good and bad.


More might be coming soon when I think of some, but you are free to suggest any race and I'll think about adding them into the list. :D


Character Sheet
Name :
Age :
Race :
Biography :
Description :


Here is where I'll put the list of characters that joined, and their characters in this RP. As for the biography, you can either put it or not, as since I want to train my analysis skills, but of course, it'll be of great help if u can put in the biography too, then again, it's my opinion, so its your choice. :p


Name : Peper Darkclaw
Age : 22
Race : Dragonian
Biography : -
Description : Tall Draconian with slim build. Always wear a helmet. The body is slim but bit muscular. Rarely speaks as he hates humans as the overpopulated species.



Name : Landemus Alseif / Landemus Galaina
Age : 19
Race : Human
Biography : As the second youngest in the Galaina family, Landemus has the highest potential of becoming a Hunter, as so his father, Vensus Galaina, trained to his maximum potential. But one thing Vensus didn't know was, Landemus does not like to be tied down on something, or in other words, freedom. He tends to skip classes and would rather sit on top of a hill and stare at the sky all day.

One day, there was an explosion at Landemus's house. The explosion apparently only destroyed his house, and not the neighbouring houses. As soon as he heard this news, he rushed back to his house, hoping that his family is still alive and well. When Landemus reached the scene, it was all but not what he hoped. His house that was once beautiful, turned into ashes, with nothing left to see. He looked at his ashed-house, depressed about what happened. He ran to one of the police that was standing outside the scene, and asked him what happened. The police said that someone placed a explosive time bomb that is able to destroy a building, but not enough to burn the other.

Landemus was shocked, he didn't knew what to do, he ran away from the scene, never wanting to see the tragedy again. He had been running and running, living in cart boxes, until he was founded and adopted into the prestigious Hunter family, the Alseif household. The people there was very nice to him, always treating him as a family, never once said anything about his background. Landemus thought he had lived a good live, until a few black man came into the house. They said that Landemus is the property of their company, and wanted to take him away. His father, Layfon Alseif, refused and closed on them. Layfon hugged Landemus and told him that he will never leave him behind, hugged along with his mother and his brother and sister.

It has been weeks since that happened, and everything has been very peaceful. Landemus attended his normal school life, showing great potential in taking the Hunter Recognition Exam, but has still the same personality like carefree, and always wants to be free to do whatever he wants to, which is sky staring. On the day of his graduation, his family was murdered by the same people who came to their house weeks ago, they called themselves the Millefiore company, and accused Landemus that he was their test subject for the superhuman creation. Landemus could not bear the sight his family dying again, as so he killed every Millefiore members there is in the scene, and he swore revenge on the Millefiore ever since the incident.

Landemus became to put more efficient into his trainings, but the incident seemed to never affected him, but whenever someone reminds him of the Millefiore, he tends to turned into a mass killing machine, but his happy memories with both of his families always calms him down, but it was that side of him that the mayor of the city banished him from the city, and to never return there ever again. Landemus never retaliate his banishment, and instead went along with it, as he know that everybody will be scared if he stays in the city. But he never gave up on becoming a Hunter, as that is what his both families would have wanted him to do, so he took the Hunter Recognition Exam and will reach into the Hunter Expedition to find out the leader of the Millefiore family, and have his revenge on them.

Description : Landemus carries two katana that he calls 'Heaven's Blade' and wore a white-colored light armor that isn't as heavy as an soldier's armor, but at the same time, as strong as an two layer metal. His white hair covers one side of his eyes. He has the height the same of an human. He had eyes with color of ember flames.




Name : Daniel Alexander
Age :21
Race : Dragonian
Biography : -
Description : Tall, somewhat muscular, Hazel hair, wears glasses(if they were made)





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Name: Aaron Talwar
Race: Half-Elf, Half Human
Biography: A young lad, he has had MAAANY interesting adventures, he is currently fourteen, he is amongst the Monatarch Defense Force, he is interested in becoming a hunter. He is specialized in defensive ice magic.
Description : Medium sized, light build, black hair, green eyes. He wears violet robes, but mysteriously wears a blue duelist hat with a feather.




Name : Sapphirius Ixion
Age : 18
Race : Dragonian
Biography : A simple dragonian with a simple life
Description : My wings and scales are bluish white, resembling ice... on "human" form, well just an average guy maybe




Name: Helvorne Whitemare

Age: 20

Race: Dwarf

Biography:

Helvorne's Mother was killed when he was only 6 yr old by unknown suspect, his father was furious the death of his mother so he decided to hunt the unknown suspect. Helvorne's father left him to his grandmother for 7 years but then came back, after losing hope finding the suspect. On his return he trained Helvorne to become a hunter so he can continue the pursiut of the suspect who killed his mother.

As the son of a well-known hunter, Helvorne is force to also become one. Even though Helvorne don't like to be one, he takes the road of becoming a hunter for his father, and for the death of his mother.

Even with their technology, Helvorne is trained by his father on the old way, using hammers and axes.

Description:

Helvorne is persistence, calm, good thinker, friendly and always stay positive in any kind of situation. He also bring his mighty hammer called "Perseverantia" that means perseverance everywhere.
 
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Anything at all. From hunting monsters, to gathering herbs, to escorting peoples and etc etc.
 
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Approved
Now, we just have to wait for more people to join us, and we are ready to go.
 
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This IS my first time RP-ing, so I took a lot from what I've watched and Rp-ed here, and put them altogether here, in Grandesia :D
 
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Uh...In Grandesia, Dragonians are the exact same of humans, except being larger and can grow wings. As for scales, once they get emotionally irate, scales will slowly show up first on face, then if he gets even MORE irate, they slowly resemble Dragons.
 
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Approved....somewhat I guess.

EDIT
Three is in this RP, and we'll need to wait for...I dunno know, 1 more?:D
One more, and we can start the RP.
 
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Now if you'll excuse me, I'll train my Zombie Survival Extreme skills while waiting for someone to join. :D

EDIT
Added States and Schools :D
 
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haha lol.
I have to give my thanks to Amaargard since he gave me this inspiration :D(Doing 3 RP's btw :p)
Now should we start with 3 people or wait?
 
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Can I join?
Name: Aaron Talwar
Race: Half-Elf, Half Human
Biography: A young lad, he has had MAAANY interesting adventures, he is currently fourteen, he is amongst the Monatarch Defense Force, he is interested in becoming a hunter. He is specialized in defensive ice magic.
Description : Medium sized, light build, black hair, green eyes. He wears violet robes, but mysteriously wears a blue duelist hat with a feather.
 
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Now we can start the RP, but the RP thread will only be up the next day, as since I have school and I need to sleep. But be surprised(maybe not), as the story gets even more interesting :D
 
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Can I join? I have no experience on RP, but I'm not a troll.

Will add my characteristics here. :D

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Name: Helvorne Whitemare

Age: 20

Race: Dwarf

Biography:

Helvorne's Mother was killed when he was only 6 yr old by unknown suspect, his father was furious the death of his mother so he decided to hunt the unknown suspect. Helvorne's father left him to his grandmother for 7 years but then came back, after losing hope finding the suspect. On his return he trained Helvorne to become a hunter so he can continue the pursiut of the suspect who killed his mother.

As the son of a well-known hunter, Helvorne is force to also become one. Even though Helvorne don't like to be one, he takes the road of becoming a hunter for his father, and for the death of his mother.

Even with their technology, Helvorne is trained by his father on the old way, using hammers and axes.


Description:

Helvorne is persistence, calm, good thinker, friendly and always stay positive in any kind of situation. He also bring his mighty hammer called "Perseverantia" that means perseverance everywhere.


Here is a image of my character.
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OOC: And just to remind everyone, it's a freeform storytelling rp so everyone's free to control any character or make another plot.
Since this is my favorite kind of RPs, I decided to drop a comment :b

The definition of Freeform Storytelling Roleplays said:
A Freeform Storytelling Roleplay is a unique kind of text-based roleplay, in which players are to cooperate writing a story, with very few to no limitations. Unlike most other kinds of roleplays, in Freeform Storytelling Roleplays you are fully permitted to use the characters of other players and alter their plots - with exceptions, though.
 
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Okay all wait. We're messed up.
clock, at post 15, delete the chapter III, add chapter V at post 40
Adiktuz, add CHAPTER III at post 20
sono, delete chapter at post 25, add CHAPTER IV at post 30, delete chapter VII at post 36

wow, so many errors.

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gunslinger, please add [42].
Adiktuz, please change [42] to [43]

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peper, please delete the chapter at [45]
 
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Yeah... I'll remove it I think.... Hm... An idea popped into my head. How about like this, this is like a freeform storytelling, all the same but, instead of no DM's or what not, there is! Except only an DM exists :p. So how about it? Just post yes or no and the majority wins.

And argh, annoying chapters. Why not just delete all the chapters stuff and move on with only the post counters :]
 
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