Played the intro and the Family's Ingredients quest. Would play more, but it's very late and I'm tired.
From what little I played, I can see this is a very well crafted campaign, absolutely wonderful. The first quest is simple, but very different from what you'd usually expect from a Warcraft map, so it feels fresh.
However, I have 2 small things to point out:
- The intro/tutorial has a bit too much talking (as the intro itself points out). I noticed you tried to remedy it a bit here and there (winding path), but I suggest tweaking it some more, especially because the first cinematic on Act I is somewhat long too (though very well made).
- There were a few grammar mistakes. Very few, but I think I should point it out. I saw a couple on the second half of the intro (I remember one on the corridor before the part where you talk about armor, with the nerubian, water elemental, etc).
Out of curiosity: On the Family's Ingredients quest, I managed to spend only 80 gold and buy the 120 gold item with the merchant, but the merchant has a 145 gold item, suggesting you can save even more gold. Did I miss something? I passed through all 7 sellers and chose the cheapest ones.
Anyway, will definitively keep playing.
From what little I played, I can see this is a very well crafted campaign, absolutely wonderful. The first quest is simple, but very different from what you'd usually expect from a Warcraft map, so it feels fresh.
However, I have 2 small things to point out:
- The intro/tutorial has a bit too much talking (as the intro itself points out). I noticed you tried to remedy it a bit here and there (winding path), but I suggest tweaking it some more, especially because the first cinematic on Act I is somewhat long too (though very well made).
- There were a few grammar mistakes. Very few, but I think I should point it out. I saw a couple on the second half of the intro (I remember one on the corridor before the part where you talk about armor, with the nerubian, water elemental, etc).
Out of curiosity: On the Family's Ingredients quest, I managed to spend only 80 gold and buy the 120 gold item with the merchant, but the merchant has a 145 gold item, suggesting you can save even more gold. Did I miss something? I passed through all 7 sellers and chose the cheapest ones.
Anyway, will definitively keep playing.