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Dark Entertainment v 2.6

Submitted by WhiteFang
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
Dark Entertainment
By Archimonde Supreme


Description
You play as Tojara the bladedancer,a powerfull blademaster with 4 normal abilitys and 1 ultimate. Your goal is to survive until the timer runs out. There are many bosses to kill and custom items to buy or get from bosses.

Gameplay
In this map time is everything. You must survive for a certain amount of time to win. As time passes you wil grow stronger but the enemies will become more and more.

Features
A custom hero
3 custom abilitys
4 mini-bosses
A duel event
7 bosses
34 custom items
9 merchants

Screenshots
screenshot 1
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Changelog
V 2.6
Redid some sounds
Made you unable to return to a cave once a boss is dead.
Gave crown of kings new model
Added some doodads
Rescaled some doodads
Made terrain less smooth
Decreased filesize by removing unuesed spells
Fixed time out
Removed a leak.


Credits
Astaroth Zion
Master Haosis
Sin'dorei 300
-Grendel
FrIkY
Peekay
UgoUgo
Jesus Hipster
~Nightmare
Blackdeath
Dhika Axe
TLI-Inferno
Blood Raven
Revilo
Kwaliti
Lord T
Mr.Goblin
Kazzo
Tarrasque

Authors note
I am Ricardo. Its my real name
Special thanks to Dhika Axe for doing preview image
I will update changelog in the next version since a error whiped out the description.

This map is not protected

Keywords:
Demon,arena,Archimonde,blademaster,outland,torture
Contents

Dark Entertainment v 2.6 (Map)

Reviews
Moderator
22:11, 12th Nov 2014 StoPCampinGn00b: map rejected due to 3/4 down rates including my rating.
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how must I improve this map

Poll closed Oct 16, 2014.
  1. add more bosses

    2 vote(s)
    50.0%
  2. make bosse stronger

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  3. add more units

    2 vote(s)
    50.0%
  4. make units stronger

    2 vote(s)
    50.0%
  5. add more mini bosses

    3 vote(s)
    75.0%
  6. make mini bosses stronger

    1 vote(s)
    25.0%
  7. add more items

    3 vote(s)
    75.0%
  8. improve items

    2 vote(s)
    50.0%
  9. increase spawn rate

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  10. increase survie time

    1 vote(s)
    25.0%
Multiple votes are allowed.
  1. 22:11, 12th Nov 2014
    StoPCampinGn00b: map rejected due to 3/4 down rates including my rating.
     
  2. bear_369

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    Could you just update the old one instead of making a new one.
    If I mistaked, then what is the difference between the two?
     
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    This isn't epicwar, don't upload same map multiple times.
     
  5. WhiteFang

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    I'm sorry I acidentily uploaded the map twice. I'm working on getting the other one removed. This is the right one wich I'm gonna update and work on.
     
  6. bear_369

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    I tested this game and this is kinda easy. :p
    Reason why this game is easy

    Reason
    1. Balrog is kinda a easy boss because I use Illusions for distracting him
    and Critic for killing him faster.
    2. Killing creeps became more easier if using Bladestorm.
    3. For Pitlords, I have encounter those and became easy if having a Mask of Death from Balrog.
    4. Oh god the final boss you created is super hard because of the stun. xD (Dat name tho xD)

    Suggestion
    1. Make Balrog stronger because he's kinda easy.
    2. Buff all the creeps.
    3. Don't want to remove the last boss's stun, just reduce it stun chance. xD
     
  7. WhiteFang

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    Map updated. Thanks for the suggestions :)
     
  8. Darko_Darkking

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    Your map description (Here in hive) could be improved to something more better (With template and/or BB code of course). I could make one for you if you need it.

    Critic
    A. Wait, this map is easy to me. Not that hard...
    B. The ability are five level (except Blade Storm), not three level (or one in case of Blade Storm).


    Suggestion
    A. Make the map more harder, or let the player choose the Difficulty
    B. Try edit those description when you want to learn an ability
    C. How about make new class? Example: Knight, Warchieft, Chaos Blademaster and etc. But still use Tojara as the character, only class and story change.
    Note: The story down here
    Could be changed to:



    But still, nice map 3/5
     
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    Nice updated. You forgot to changed the version of the map name if this has updated to 1.1. :eekani:
     
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    A cheap map which lacks of quality. The hero I control is the common Blademaster, nothing new. Once I get mask of death, the game is extremely easy. I just keep watching and occasionally use Mirror Image and Bladestorm to kill the creeps. So boring. Then, I didn't even have time to kill the boss that the timer for victory expired and I won. I should win the game when the boss dies, not when a timer expires otherwise I can stay in the corner of the map or keep Wind Walking for the whole duration. Maybe a trigger which orders the creeps to attack me and reducing Wind Walk duration to 5 seconds would be suitable. I would also like that 100% lifesteal to be decreased to at least 30%. The blademaster is a swift attacker so with 100% lifesteal I had full HP even inside the horde of monsters attacking me.
    I would recommend you to add custom skills because copying the blademaster is totally unoriginal and unprofessional.
    I will not rate now to encourage you to improve the map and convince me that this map deserves a high rating.
     
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    Map updated. This version is especialy for all those people who said the map was easy.
     
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    Maybe change the trigger that the final boss will spawn when the timer finished and won the game if you defeated the boss. That's my only suggestion :wink:
     
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    Still there is that cursed 100% lifesteal. And the custom skills are pretty weird really. Chain Lightning for an axe spell? The ultimate is "Blade Throw" but there is a red lightning? Sincerely, even the old skills were better but do not restore them anyway! Remove that stunning skill and Blade Throw. Replace them with AoE (Area of Effect) skills to damage multiple units. By the way, after I get mask of death, I still keep watching and do nothing. The Pit Lords then are too oversized, cut down their size.
    That's all for now.
     
  14. Darko_Darkking

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    Maybe you should get make a team to help you
     
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    Map updated.
     
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    Okay, I will try this again

    Critic

    1. The unit seem too much, the arena is flooded with it, causing some lag
    2. The ability description... you forgot to edit it, as I said, it has 5 level for normal spell and 2 level for ultimate!
    3. Damn it, why the price of tome of agility +5, tome of strength +5, and tome of intelligence +5 same as those who +3?
    4. When I buy mask of death, all seem to easy


    Suggestion

    1. Reduce the amount of unit that summoned
    2. Again, try edit those description when you want to learn an ability!
    3. The price, edit it
    4. Mask of Death, it should be have lower percentage, like 20%?
    ____________________________________________________________
    5. You should improve the Blade Dancer's ability, like trigger enchanting it
    6. New class? I got bored playing this map
     
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    Here's my review.

    Dat Review

    Firstly the terrain needs to be re-worked for it is blocking some area's and limiting your ability to move around. Here's some points I hope you at least read.

    1. Without a mask of death you lose, try to hint at that or make it so you don't require that.
    2. Reduce the amount of units you create as well since your trying to improve your triggering skill follow this link: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/triggers-scripts-269/things-leak-35124/ meaning fix your leaks.
    3. The abilities are lame and over-used since 2003, you need to either learn how to code/trigger your own abilities/spells or get creative in the object editor.
    4. There is barely any items and the ones that are there are mostly useless, try adding more useful items.
    5. Increase the size of the arena/map.
    6. Maybe offer a character choice between more orcs who follow the same story as Tojara and get trapped.
    7. The ultimate definitely needs to be replaced, why would more orcs follow Tojara and/or get summoned there in a pit of no return basically?
    8. Maybe try adding a custom interface/UI, icons, maybe textures and/or models?
    9. Improve the gameplay to a point where it isn't just sit there and watch your character auto attack stuff to death.
    10. Add more sounds/music to spice up the gameplay a bit?
    11. Remove the bash from Archimonde or at least put it at level 1.
    12. Maybe add Easter-eggs/secrets such as an alternate ending, hidden items, other beings trapped down there with Tojara.
    13. Calm down on the mass amount of mini-bosses/pitlords.


    More advanced tutorial for triggering knowledge: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...u-should-know-when-using-triggers-gui-233242/

    I would offer more suggestions, but I don't want to overwhelm you. It has the potential to be a good map, good luck and hope you keep improving. Will review again if asked.

    Sadly I must give this map a 2/5, I will not vote for approval or rejection just yet. Like I said it is still a basic map, it needs lots of work dedicated to it still. Try checking out the spells section if your lost for idea's on spells for your hero and maybe your boss-type units/enemy heroes.
     
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    Map updated
     
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    Again, review again

    Critic
    • You has typos (Prins)
    • Rescueable hero seem weak
    • Blade dancer's third ability, evasion. Why would people spend their skill point if on evasion when it has three level if the miss chance still same?
    • Overflooded unit...
    • This too hard, you must buy Mask of Death to win the game
    • Mask of Death keep your health full as longest you attack
    • The Mask of Death is easy to buy, just kill
      Only the one who know this thing may see
      :P
      Rehcra Lateleks*
      *Rewrite it from backward
    Suggestion
    • Prins should be Prince
    • Increase the power of Arthas
    • I think it should be:
      Evasion Level 1: 10%
      ~~ll~~ Level 2: 15%
      ~~ll~~ Level 3: 20%
      ~~ll~~ Level 4: 25%
      ~~ll~~ Level 5: 30%
    • I think you should change the map system, it's overflooded
    • Weaker the damage of enemies
    • Lower the life steal
    • Make the price higher, and the reward lower


    Actually, I want to ask you something, do you play and test this game too?