BTNStoneTroll

[Moderator]

17:32, 14th May 2014
Sin'dorei300: The face needs better definition and the left tusk looks a bit too big.

12:51, 20th May 2014
Sin'dorei300: Define the face better from the background.

10:53, 11th Apr 2015
Sin'dorei300: Could be useful.

 

[Heinvers]

Nice. I would zoom it out but idk if it'll look good.
4/5 for encouragement.

 

[A Void]

It looks too plain and empty. I suggest add more diversity, besides the icon looks very boring. 3/5

 

[BLazeKraze]

Can you explain ? Like what ?

 

[A Void]

Can you explain ? Like what ?

Add wrinkles, piercings, skin tones. Make it a little brighter, Zoom it out...
It just looks too plain. There is nothing besides the troll skin and tusks.

Edit: Mouth and eyes look very dull. They should have more diversity in colors.

 

[BLazeKraze]

Well, I will update that tomorrow ,

 

[PlankingWolf]

The left teeth is a bit crooked, it's bugging me.

 

[Orcnet]

Really bad-ass looking.

 

[The Panda]

Seems very dark on one side of the troll, but thats just because his face is black itself lovely icon nonetheless.

 

[Chaosy]

Not very useful but EXTREMELY nice, I really like the way the icon looks, shading and everything. 5/5 and +4 rep

 

[Sin'dorei300]

I sent u an example, u did something but the left side of the face isn't enough defined.

 

[BLazeKraze]

Honestly, I don't really get it . because I follow the shading ...

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Can u see the difference?

 

[chr2]

This is a great improvement! I have a few remarks though:
-The tusks look a bit odd. I'd say you need to change the angle of the left one, and maybe move the right one a but further away from the face.
-The nose is a bit too pointy. I would round it off slightly.
-The highlights on the gray, untattooed part of the forehead need to be changed, as the they make the tattoo look more like a mask than, well, a tattoo. Maybe the highlights on the tattooed part could be centered a bit more around the middle of his face (even if this is not the intended light-angle).

Still, you did a great deal of improvements and it looks way better nonetheless