BTNHolyStrength

[Moderator]

16:56, 28th May 2012
I3lackDeath: Commented.

23:37, 4th Aug 2012
Apheraz Lucent: The technique of very high contrast you're using is really not working. Anatomy of the hand is wrong, and could use a good remake. Aside from that, try with smoother color transitions and zoom out from the hand a bit.

 

[snowman990]

This look good, but you need some little edit, i think. It just a bit dark for me.

 

[Walle]

Try to make his hands look less like bananas/french fries, the anatom is weird. also don't let the shading/highlighting destroy the shape of the hand.

 

[Mgeterno11]

It is nice, but try to add more shading and the hands a bit darker. Good luck, mate.

 

[I3lackDeath]

You really need to work on the perspective and anatomy of this glove.
Also, tone down the background. It's way too bright as a whole.

 

[JollyD]

I will work on it more for sure

 

[Lightskin]

try to study the anatomy and then try to copy it:

You kind of need longer proximal falanges, different size on each finger, and some other things. Also the BG makes the whole gauntlet a bit confusing.

 

[Iconer]

why so col?

 

[JollyD]

Completely redraw the icon. ^_^

Here are the little bigger one 120-120. original is 640-640

 

[Lightskin]

Completely redraw the icon. ^_^

Here are the little bigger one 120-120. original is 640-640

dude that one looks way much better!
Still you could make some changes just to make it even better; like making the middle finger a little more long and making the fingers like an "L" instead of an "I" I mean:

See? That would make it look better; like grasping the ground. (not sure if this is what you want it to look like though) just an opinion ^^

Keep it up and uploading!

 

[Mgeterno11]

Much better. Is is nice and awesome, works completely in-game. 5/5
And it presents the hand even better.

 

[JollyD]

thank you for your help ^_^

 

[Lightskin]

another tip, use this tool for the borders: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/tools-560/button-manager-v1-8-2-a-116280/

 

[JollyD]

another tip, use this tool for the borders: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/tools-560/button-manager-v1-8-2-a-116280/

I use this tool for borders, suggestion not for me

 

[Pyramidhe@d]

the shape looks better than before but i really do not think your fingers have bones like that.

 

[JollyD]

Updated

 

[rcshaggy]

How about you add the holy glow to the bottom of the icon as well and this is a good icon. :3

 

[JollyD]

How about you add the holy glow to the bottom of the icon as well and this is a good icon. :3

that could work, thanks dude

 

[JollyD]

Updated, added down lightening, is it sexy now>? ^_^

 

[MasterHaosis]

Ah I like it! But like I said, use skeleton hand, add green light and add Unholy Strenght as opposite to this for Undead.

 

[JollyD]

Ah I like it! But like I said, use skeleton hand, add green light and add Unholy Strenght as opposite to this for Undead.

hmm i will took only the perspective and some proportions other will be different) yeah thanks for color and bones suggestion)

 

[Lightskin]

remember the "L" bones suggestion I made, check the pic I did again.

 

[JollyD]

remember the "L" bones suggestion I made, check the pic I did again.

please detail what is wrong with current "L" that i have

 

[Lightskin]

Look at the image. Do you see what I say?
The actual bones are way too.. rect, they could use some curves like real ones.

 

[JollyD]

Look at the image. Do you see what I say?
The actual bones are way too.. rect, they could use some curves like real ones.

Hmm, nope, i do not see this are armored fingers so i do not think it need to be more curved

 

[I3lackDeath]

You don't understand what he's trying to point out. Each finger has 3 elements (thumb have 2). The overall anatomy is distorted.
To pick up what Pyra said, look at your own hand and try to reproduce its features.

 

[JollyD]

You don't understand what he's trying to point out. Each finger has 3 elements (thumb have 2). The overall anatomy is distorted.
To pick up what Pyra said, look at your own hand and try to reproduce its features.

Great, on distorted. Just great. Will look and redraw and distort.

 

[Pyramidhe@d]

can you please count how many bonees you have in each of your finger?

 

[JollyD]

Another changes by jollyD (me ) + bonus icons for good people (ATT + UPG)