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zombie2279: Too simple. Zoom in, add more details, like detailing the writings, adding scratches and generally a more metallish look. I don't exactly like the red background, but you are free to leave it. Might come in handy once you succeed in fixing it.
09:44, 22th Jun 2009
zombie2279: Most of the things I said earlier still stand. I recommend you to zoom out a bit, so both the tags are visible in whole. It's not necessary, but it will surely help you achieve better looks. Now, in order to recieve my approval, I'd still like you to give it more details, you are free to use pictures for referrence.
Here's one that might give you a few tips:
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Notice that there are some holes in it, shaded letters, and some scratches. I recommend at least adding the holes, and some more highlights on yours (in order to achieve a more metallish outlook).
Also note that I do not require you to use the pic given, I just wanted to demonstrate how you could add more details. The icon definitely has potential and you're close to approval.
10:07, 25th Jun 2009
zombie2279: No changes made, rejected until updated.