advise on my map

[Covenant-Assassin]

http://s36.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=39AHD0BKR93OA3UGJ7TICBB83H

^^upped map

Hi, i'm new to the forums, but i came here because i'm working on an rpg, and i could use the advise of some pros. this is a basic closed rpg, and i dont think ill be adding save/load anytime soon.
if the link is dead, it is also in these map archives under legend of choss. please, post feedback here or email me, message me on msn or yahoo, something..

well thnx

 

[Caranthir]

I'v just played your map, and I must say it's really good. Though you have used a little bit to much of the black areas. In thous cases you have used the black title, you could have raised the ground or put out some trees. For my part, I think it should be better like that.
And you also have to build up the questlog better. You have information about the game on both sides. Why don't you take all the importent info in a 'Info:' text in the beginning instead so that you can use some bort optional and requiered quests?
And what does the spells do? It is the same info for every spell and I can't see a change in it. I tried the Ninja. Good choice of voice, but to put the bladestorm on it wasn't a good choice. There is only a animation on the blademaster for that.
I think this is all. Don't take this negativ. I just wan't to tell you what I think. This is a good map. And I think it soon will be a great map.

 

[Sp4WnEd]

I know this has no importance of the topic whatsoever,
but that`s a pretty big signature sorry. >_>
You can think of this as a compliment, if you like, but it`s not..

 

[Minkorok]

whoa... didnt even notice how huge that sig was til he mentioned it, might wanna shrink it a bit - would still look good ... may i ask why it is that you dont have save/load codes? if its just a 'i dunno how to' thing I can help ya out some, like setup a basic and provide instructions on finishing it to your specifics if you like.