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Well hello there!
So I wrote this - short story I guess it could be called. It started from a dream I had a long time ago that stuck with me and for some reason, as of late, I felt the need to write it down. But a lot of the details were fuzzy so I expanded it into a story, adding elements that were not originally there, but generally maintaining the original idea.
Aaany way, this is the first time I wrote anything of the sort and did not know what to do with it after I finished, and then I remember this board
(Glad to see this community still going)
Would love to hear what you guys think about it, any criticism is welcomed, even grammar as I am almost certain that I messed the tenses all over the place.
The Circle Of The Pyramid
Oh, and maybe you could throw in some ideas for a better title?
Later Edit: Modified the story a bit. I guess this is the final version. I think I could pick this up as a hobby. Any general impressions?
So I wrote this - short story I guess it could be called. It started from a dream I had a long time ago that stuck with me and for some reason, as of late, I felt the need to write it down. But a lot of the details were fuzzy so I expanded it into a story, adding elements that were not originally there, but generally maintaining the original idea.
Aaany way, this is the first time I wrote anything of the sort and did not know what to do with it after I finished, and then I remember this board
(Glad to see this community still going)Would love to hear what you guys think about it, any criticism is welcomed, even grammar as I am almost certain that I messed the tenses all over the place.
The Circle Of The Pyramid
Oh, and maybe you could throw in some ideas for a better title?
Later Edit: Modified the story a bit. I guess this is the final version. I think I could pick this up as a hobby
. Any general impressions?
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