Madara it's kinda imba, with timing he protects against physical+magical and then if he carelessy dies he revives with uber dmg before it's really messed up.
Vegeta it's powerless late game cause it's all with casting time.
On choosing abilities, Galeoth Frost Fang and Master of something skill(next to Frost fang) had some same description dunno what that skill does because the description belong to Frost Fang.
The recipes doesn't work when i use them, it is needed to do something else?
On chapter two when i used...
I know it's a demo but:
-The circles need to be replaced, in my opinion
-Buildings needs another camera, because of walls it's hard to see some stuff, in case of circle of powers, it's hard to leave
-The bear almost killed the guy who gave me the quest(don't remember his name) and also i think...
I'm bad at names and the idea it's the scientest be a necromancer indeed i just dont like the part of the staff cause he doesn't cast spells he only created the abomination. Werewolf would only affect the class, in my opinion, i mean his equipments(werewolf just uses armor, he uses claws to...
[Quests] - "The shadow wolf when i kill it the quest doesn't update(i kill it nothing happens just drops rejuvenation and nothing happens when i pick it, i also killed it again when respawned nothing happened too"
1000Comment: Yeah trigger was bad!
Trigger - Turn on Q Anaxes 02 a <gen>Replaced...
For a battle, that terrain it's so bad and such a description you should start from point 0, in future try have those in mind on description:
-Features(whats unique on map from the others(counts for origininality))
-Screenshots(Gives us a idea of the map and adds some attention)
Here's another that i remember from the old times being a vampire because of a attack of a vampire on oblivion ^^
"The curse of the black wolf"
Event: "A strange black wolf bitten you and ran off"
Description: "As time pass from the event you start feeling some effects of animal instict like...
"[Insert a name], the thief"
Description: "Various villagers found stuff missing after night."(It's random)
How to start: After the event occured, you may speak with any villager located on a place where all gathered(the ones who were stolen), and he/she will tell you about a thief who it is...
While on quests for hints:
-"What's going on?"
-"Do you know where i can find ***?"
-"Do you know anything about ***?"
I'm not feeling inspired today maybe i try another day
-"May i help you?"
-"Do you wish something?"
-"I don't have time for...
Improve description by telling:
-Gameplay(Like we need to pick a hero and fight some creeps and do some quests)
-Unique features(What makes this game different from others)
-Some screenshots(Calls some attencion)
-Items(if theres some)
-Changelog(for further updates)
Yeah no strategy just fight, fight, fight maybe something more original and some story between missions suddenly you allying those primal then you with some kinda of samurais that you dunno yet.
I like the skins and spells they're pretty good.
You could maybe put spells name and a small...
If you dunno what to add to description you could:
-Tell us the spells of each panda and their stats(like hp since this a map which hp matters)
-Add screenshots(you need a bb code called img)
-For updates add a changelog(if you didnt updated then ignore this point)
-Credits(if you used someone...
- Bad description: you dont give us enough information about the cinematic
- Minimap preview doesnt seems good: terrain seems plain but will check and tell what i think
Edit: Too short, no story and some pointless actions like why did footman surrond that shadow if it already smashed a bit of...
"Nameles" - Nameless
"Threw" - Maybe through because of sentence
"on the map are different areas" - on the map, there are different areas
If this is so badly like the map some stuff may get confusing also use BB Codes to improve description further and also tell us more about the map like: