Hmm, first I must say that your map is good, I haven't checked all of spells, but seriously thats my first impression. Ok, these are some points that I think should be improved:
Terrain
Terrain is pretty good, but it gives much lag in game. First you use too much waterfall, for god sake, remove many of them, they really give lag in game. Maybe they're beautiful at first time, but after play it 10 minutes, no one really care about them. I see you stack so many waterfalls at same place, I think it is really redundancy. If you wanna keep those waterfalls, try to stack them maximum 2 waterfalls. Don't place them really close to each other. I mean you can place them close to each other so you can create a big waterfall, but don't place it too close so they stack together.
That weather effect really annoying, why do you make it random? Sometimes there are snow rain, wind, bleh... If you really wanna add weather effect, use one weather only, I suggest rain, set it to appear rarely. Clear weather is the best one.
Why are you reaveal all of the map area? I think it's a bad idea, players cannot do ambush with their enemies. If you want that terrain to be visible to the palyer, you should reveal just some area using trigger. Or you can leave it like that, but remove hero indicator on minimap.
Units and Hero
Great, you use so much skin and models which will bring a brand new variation compared to another AOS. I haven't checked all of spells, just make sure you create a balance spells and create a strong character of the hero. Like, if you wanna make a mage hero, make it a mage, don't add Critical Strike ability to him. Create a proper hero based on its model and skin. Like, Crypt Lord should be a tank hero, Illidan should be an agile hero, some models that has an evil sense (chaos orc, foul creeps) should be on dark side. don't do DotA's lame mistakes.
Make another hero for next version, so there are plenty of hero that a player can choice. It will make them wanna play it again and again. Don't forget to make another cool spells. It don't need to be a hardcore coded spells, remember, players doesn't give a damn about the code, they just see
spell's eye candy, spell's effect, and spell's uniqueness. Leaks are annoying though.
Gameplay
I think it will takes a damn long time, the tower has great hit points, but the enemy forces just have little attack damage. Anyway I like the new attack type and armor type of heroes for each side. I hope you make it more of them like elemental, dark, holy, fire, ice, lightning, poison, etc. An element has weak points against specific element.
Items, I haven't tried all of them, but all of the stores placed too far from each other. I suggest to place them near to each other, so it will be easy to purchase something (except for secret store, if any).
Hmm, why don't you add creeps unit on several empty area, it is so dull there are no creeps in such a huge area. I suggest to put one strongest creep who holds a great artifact which will dropped if it is dead. This artifact shouldnt be sold by any store. And, add some secret store on some places.
Ok, I think those are my suggestion, too damn long eh? Well, your map leaks horribly, I don't know where, but it takes so much time just for exit program or quit game. Hope you will keep your map improved for next version so and so on. I have a feeling that this would be a great AOS map.
Approved
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