20:00, 27th Feb 2009 by bounty hunter2:
Low quality map. Rejected with a 1/5.

You can find my full review Here.

in TheBladeWaY CTF 1.10 BETA, i`ll remove one hit gameplay. Change it to HP points. And add one class more. Add more stats. For Hp stats, you must use armor to upgrade HP stats. Please wait for TheBladeWaY CTF 1.10 BETA. It is in work progress.

Here is my rating and comment:

1 - 10 points go on originality
1 - 10 points go on object editor work
1 - 10 points go on scripting
1 - 10 points go on terrain
1 - 10 points go on bug free
1 - 10 points go on gameplay*/fun factor
1 - 10 points go on lag
1 - 10 points go on proper submission and crediting
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->That equals 80 points max.
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+ Cinematic
1 - 10 points on camera work
1 - 10 points on dialog
1 - 10 points on music and or voice acting
- Cinematic
Object editor work
* Not in cinematic
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That equals 100 points max.
To get a Hive grade over 1/5 at least 50% of the 80 (Triggered map) or of the 100 (Cinematic map) points is needed. That means at least 40 or 50 points. However if a map gets rated over 1/5 by me, that doesn't mean that I will imidietly vote it to be approved.

Originality: 3 points
Not so original a idea. Nothing special was in the map to make it different then many others.

Object editor work: 8 points
Working hotkeys, you added some nice colors, overall it was decent.

Scripting: 3 points
You protected the map so I couldn't look it up in the trigger editor, however for what I have seen in the beginning you must fix it. The sole typing for the score is too long. You should make player 1 red type any number between 1 and 60 and thats the score number. And give him more then 15 seconds, and the game shouldn't run then.

Terrain: 4 points
There were good parts of the terrain, I liked the middle a lot. However some parts of the forest are to plain, the waterfalls goes from nowhere.

Bug Free: 6 points
You must fix a lot of spelling and grammar issues. I suggest you ask someone to do that for you.

Gameplay/Fun Factor: 4 points
There are way to little different heroes or classes in your case. You must vary it much more. Adding actual items for buying would be nice.

Lag: 8 points
Fine loading time, no lag.

Proper submission and crediting: 1 point
Do this:
- Put images to your submission
- Credit your model/skin/icon creator here at THW
- Mention that the map is protected

In overall: 37 / 80
46% minimal 50% not met.
For the hive grade: 1/5 I suggest this map for: On Hold
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In overall it is a okay map that has some issues. What I suggested before:

- Fix the scoring system and the beginning
- Fix the submission problems
- You could involve items to enhance gameplay
- You could involve more classes for lower levels to enhance gameplay

For now a 1/5, till you fix what must be fix, then I will probably vote for approval.

Good Luck, bounty hunter2
I might not be checking this topic for some time. If you have any questions about the review or you update the map and want me to check it again, feel free to PM me or Visitor message me at any time.

Good ctf map. I think capture the flag should give something to the whole team like exp/or gold. You also level pretty slow for getting to the classes.

I think there may be an issue with picking classes. I wanted to check out them and was having some trouble getting a game going so i played single player and used cheats to lvl and get stats. I buffed my health to around 1100 and hero to 10 and tried picking a lvl 10 class but it Didn't work. I increased my hp hit 15 and tried the other classes and no luck.

Bumkt said:

I think there may be an issue with picking classes. I wanted to check out them and was having some trouble getting a game going so i played single player and used cheats to lvl and get stats. I buffed my health to around 1100 and hero to 10 and tried picking a lvl 10 class but it Didn't work. I increased my hp hit 15 and tried the other classes and no luck.

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Sorry about that bug bumkt, but at TheBladeWaY 1.12 i will closed that bug. And some classes must be greater stats than other. Or not, it will not work. Example, You have HP 1000(50 hp point) and other stats is 30. You only have one choice that pick ShieldMan class.

The lumber caps out at having 6 even if you continue to level.

Hey, who was reject my map??? now i can`t upload again.