The threads of fate

[Moderator]

Next Review: [2016-06-24]

Rufus Moderation Note What you need to do: Is there a pattern to when Jainas switches between fire and ice spells? It oculd be a good idea, but as it is now, it seems random when she switches, and that is pretty annoying. The priest just keeps running in circles around you, never healing himself if he is hurt. This could be solved by making him stand still while near you. He drives me crazy with his running around! The terrain is a little bit strange. Some areas looks decent, and the indoors looks really good! I love the detail with the piano. However, outdoors, the terrain height difference looks pretty weird as it raisees and lowers with giant variance. The cave was pretty undecorated also. The gameplay was unfortunately not very fun, as it was pretty standard fights. Nothing special going on, and you don't have controllable own units so you can't microcontrol in order to turn a battle to your advantage. Jainas abilities are standard ones, and they cost a lot of mana, which she cannot get back in other ways thatn slow regeneration or mana potions (which aren't very common). I had to basic attack my way through a lot of enemies, and I kinda lost interest when I couldn't get past a big group of skeletons in the cave, since I had no health or health potions left. The gameplay could use some updating. The cinematics english is understandable, but could use some polishing, as it contains a big lot of spelling and grammar errors. The story itself doesn't really get through, but the fragments of the story that I did understand was prett interesting. Also, the opening cinematic still has the line missing that I pointed out in my previous review, which make me feel that perhaps this review won't really help improve the game either. Status will be set to awaiting update, however, I will wait one week to put that status on it, since you might get some player feedback if it remains here in the pending section a while longer.

I watched the opening cinematic, and saw that there was a line missing in the conversation between jaina and the messenger.

Also, upon launching chapter two, nothing happened. I saw the undead cinematic border and a black screen, but nothing more happened. I couldn't play further as nothing worked except "alt-f4".

Status Set to Awaiting Update.

10:54, 8th Apr 2016
Rufus:

Rufus Moderation Note What you need to do: Add a decent description. As it is now, it is not very informative. You have used a template that works fine, but you need to fill it a little more with information about the game. The only thing we can actually read about the game is: Gameplay The kingdom Theramore is at peace again, the forces of Thrall had retired the island, and had returned Jaina her leadership in Theramore, But that tranquility It was threatened. And that is listed under "Gameplay" while it actually is story. Also, I suggest putting credits in hidden tags, so that it won't cover such a big part of the screen. You have already added a hidden tag on the bottom of the description. Just put the list of skins and icons and other imports under there too. Until a good description is provided, this maps status is set to Awaiting Update.

21:39, 29th Feb 2016
Ardenian: Please add a credits list to the map description, judging from the screenshots you use custom resources. Please also credit the custom map preview picture.

 

[Ardenian]

There are credits missing for the custom models and other custom recourses you used.

 

[Shadow Fury]

Wow! This campaign is back after one year since its rejection. Well, you should've updated your old upload and notified a moderator but never mind... it's been one year.

 

[Sclammerz]

what's this? Looking good from the screenshots.

Edit:
You could at least give some proper chapter names but that is just me anyway. Also you could also fix your map description it's missing some parts.

 

[nigromante2012]

Yes i've

 

[deepstrasz]

Is this finished?

 

[Sclammerz]

Hi! I have played your campaign but didn't finished it because after chapter three my warcraft suddenly crash something error happened (I don't know if it's your campaign's fault or mine) and here are my thoughts.
TERRAIN:
The terrain was good in some areas while there are many areas that it looks dull and flat, just plain flat and it looks horrible. But I must say many areas were looking good and decorated very well. Those indoors are look quite good but the cities in some areas needs more work.
GAMEPLAY:
This is was not good at all, you see the quests were showed bad and sometimes confusing. Jaina has interesting and great spells and I like the way you made them swap from fire to ice and vice versa. Don't have major problems aside from the quests.
CINEMATIC:
This is where your campaign fails, though your cameras are good but the dialogues are poorly made and have many grammatical errors. I think you should ask someone to help you with the dialogues. It's just bad.

Overall I think this map really needs more work. I give it 2/5 and I vote for Needs Fix. Have and good day and happy mapping.

 

[Rufus]

Rufus Moderation Note What you need to do: Add a decent description. As it is now, it is not very informative. You have used a template that works fine, but you need to fill it a little more with information about the game. The only thing we can actually read about the game is: Gameplay The kingdom Theramore is at peace again, the forces of Thrall had retired the island, and had returned Jaina her leadership in Theramore, But that tranquility It was threatened. And that is listed under "Gameplay" while it actually is story. Also, I suggest putting credits in hidden tags, so that it won't cover such a big part of the screen. You have already added a hidden tag on the bottom of the description. Just put the list of skins and icons and other imports under there too. Until a good description is provided, this maps status is set to Awaiting Update.

 

[Eldin HawkWing]

Nice Terrain and Structures

 

[Rufus]

I watched the opening cinematic, and saw that there was a line missing in the conversation between jaina and the messenger.

Also, upon launching chapter two, nothing happened. I saw the undead cinematic border and a black screen, but nothing more happened. I couldn't play further as nothing worked except "alt-f4".

Status Set to Awaiting Update.

 

[nigromante2012]

I watched the opening cinematic, and saw that there was a line missing in the conversation between jaina and the messenger.

Also, upon launching chapter two, nothing happened. I saw the undead cinematic border and a black screen, but nothing more happened. I couldn't play further as nothing worked except "alt-f4".

Status Set to Awaiting Update.

you can send me a picture of error ... I can not find

 

[Rufus]

Well, It is just a black screen with undead cinematic border... :/

I'm going to ask someone else to check this out, in order to make sure it is not just my computer that is messing with me.

 

[Rufus]

The description is missing now. :/

 

[Rufus]

Next Review: [2016-06-24]

Rufus Moderation Note What you need to do: Is there a pattern to when Jainas switches between fire and ice spells? It oculd be a good idea, but as it is now, it seems random when she switches, and that is pretty annoying. The priest just keeps running in circles around you, never healing himself if he is hurt. This could be solved by making him stand still while near you. He drives me crazy with his running around! The terrain is a little bit strange. Some areas looks decent, and the indoors looks really good! I love the detail with the piano. However, outdoors, the terrain height difference looks pretty weird as it raisees and lowers with giant variance. The cave was pretty undecorated also. The gameplay was unfortunately not very fun, as it was pretty standard fights. Nothing special going on, and you don't have controllable own units so you can't microcontrol in order to turn a battle to your advantage. Jainas abilities are standard ones, and they cost a lot of mana, which she cannot get back in other ways thatn slow regeneration or mana potions (which aren't very common). I had to basic attack my way through a lot of enemies, and I kinda lost interest when I couldn't get past a big group of skeletons in the cave, since I had no health or health potions left. The gameplay could use some updating. The cinematics english is understandable, but could use some polishing, as it contains a big lot of spelling and grammar errors. The story itself doesn't really get through, but the fragments of the story that I did understand was prett interesting. Also, the opening cinematic still has the line missing that I pointed out in my previous review, which make me feel that perhaps this review won't really help improve the game either. Status will be set to awaiting update, however, I will wait one week to put that status on it, since you might get some player feedback if it remains here in the pending section a while longer.

 

[JesusHipster]

From what i see in the screenshot this must be a very fine campaign.

However "опубликован" is not a nickname of model author. It's "published" in russian.

 

[Soap Mactavish]

This campaign is buggy. I think you really need to fix them in order for us to like it. The storyline is merely custom for me. There is one level in your campaign that is a horror place. Is there really a place there in the world of warcraft? In the campaign menu also you should really give names to them. The music was also awesome. The terrain is nice. If i will rate this I give it 3/5. Nice and good work but it needs a big update.