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Vengeancekael 
Date: 2012/Nov/09 19:32:24
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Date: 2012/Nov/09 19:32:24
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Comment:
The writing is very lacking, it's not quite... deep or exciting to read.
The combat scenes are boring and not really so well animated.
The terrain requires a lot work, I suggest you don't use blizzard cliffs and instead go with the height tools, next fill up the environment a lot more and make it look like a real tower of ice. :V
The camera work also needs some improvements, try moving the camera constantly and zooming in more.
The combat scenes are boring and not really so well animated.
The terrain requires a lot work, I suggest you don't use blizzard cliffs and instead go with the height tools, next fill up the environment a lot more and make it look like a real tower of ice. :V
The camera work also needs some improvements, try moving the camera constantly and zooming in more.
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