camera 1.5/5
the camera was very jumpy and at points its angles were terrable
Terrain 2/5
your terrain really needs some work like at the waterfall
story 2/5
there isent realy a story this doesent seem to have any thing to do with the first part. it also makes no sense
sound 1/5
the only sound is one sone though the whole thing and you have other songs imported that are only making the map bigger u never used them
Over all 1/5
out of all that i give you a 1/5 and lacking