eubz said:

You have to include in your description the authors of the models, spells, etc. you used which you haven't made yourself.

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  One thing I hate about maps is music playing over music. It sounds sooo bad. Human music is playing in the
  background, while you play custom undead music on top. No, no no. Also play your undead music as "music"
  and NOT a sound. This is so the player can go into his audio setting and turn off music if he pleases.

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  As for your terrain, you could add modern looking houses. The current houses appear medieval which contradict
  with the police cars and roads, ultimately looking odd. I also reccommend using much less fire. Fire is ok, but its
  just EVERYWHERE. It simply seems annoying. Make each area of the map unique. Dont just throw fire all over the
  place. You did the same thing with impaled corpses. There no sense to it, just impaled corpses everywhere. Surely
  you can position them better, some areas may not have impaled corpses in them you know. Its overused is what I'm
  trying to say, lol. Additionally, add some grass. There is a lot of that white tile besides roads. Maybe grassed areas
  would be appropiate in some areas just to give your map more terrain variation. In the city use "Trimmed Grass" or
  something like that. Outside the city normal grass would suit.

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  I noticed the maximum damage for cluster rocks is very low and the damage output is never what is described on the spell.
  You know 1100 damage killed that abomination boss I versed in no time at all. He only had 4000 health. Consider lowering the
  damage and raising the maximum damage so the description is more accurate. If you want the spell to be much weaker on large groups, specify that in the spell. Also the cluster rockets had a 5 second stun. Jesus man. There are 5 players. That means 5
  heroes with cluster rockets. That's a 25 second stun. The cooldown on cluster rockets is 8 seconds or something. Are you aware
  that you can permenately stun any mass of zombies? Game over, win. Too easy.

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  Come up with better ideas for spells. There is trueshot aura and critical strike. The names don't fit the theme for
  marines. And besides, every other game has trueshot aura and critical strike. Its boring. The least you can do
  is change trueshot aura to "Leadership Aura" or something to make it seem like a marine spell. Critical Strike
  could be changed to "Headshot" or something. And blink can be changed to "Jump". Are they supernatural beings that
  teleport, or are they marines in real life facing a zombie onslaught?

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  My screen also flickers black sometimes. I don't know why, but you should look into it.

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  Maybe when a boss comes, you can feature him with a cinematic. A big abomination came in and it wasn't too exciting.
  If you played a short cinematic of him mutating out of a zombie cave and making some freaky zombie noise, it would be so much
  cooler and interesting.