Vengeancekael: Private Message
Date: 2012/Mar/23 18:21:39

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Comment: Please tell us more about the cinematic and maybe provide us with some screenshots.
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i have used wow models and downloaded from WoW Underground

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Does this mean you ripped the models from WoW? I'm not sure the Hive allows that.

A new rule was introduced some time ago, they are allowed.

Well, How about a bit more length? A plot? camera angles? fade filters? sounds? terrain?

This isn't he type of destructive critics, but I'd like to help you rather than break you down.

1. Camera makes up for a very big part of the cinematic! you should use as many as possible.

2. The fade filter is also very important to achieve that visual excellence, so at the very start of the cinematic, it should be faded black, then over a few seconds the cinematic should commence and the camera fades in slowly to improve tension.

3. A plot makes up the body of the cinematic, This cinematic had no plot and no tension. The only time something occurred on my screen during the entire session of the cinematic was when that dreadlord just randomly appeared and reported human presence* in the nearby woods. The plot was very anti climactic and disappointing, I was expecting a battle!

4. Vocabulary, Grammar and language literacy is very important: "they wil probly take like 2 - 6 days to finish ur work." or "Theres AN human in the woods!" - Is an example of BAD grammar and illiteracy. Because the nature of a cinematic is of such that there exists no gameplay and merely displays or portrays an event which occurred, Vocabulary is of vital importance.

5. Terrain and usage of props ultimately completes the visual literacy of the cinematic. A well made terrain with excellent usage of terrain goes hand-by-hand with good usage of camera angles. This has a positive effect on the viewer and will ultimately have the viewer appreciate the cinematic. Your plot can be as clever thought as possible, with out the painting, IT'S BLAND!

So I hope you heed my advice and don't stop making maps

Im sorry to disapoint you now about my grammar sometimes im tuping very fast and it coud come up with an mistake

A new rule was introduced some time ago, they are allowed.

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Must have been when my internet was out.

Sawcawarr, Can I edit your cinematic to just show you how you can improve?

mehh, I did it anyway

mehh, I did it anyway

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Don't do that again without permission or it leads to infraction.

No 1 helped me i just used models from wow undamed and hive nothing else and im gonna see what you did with my map im not mad acshaly i must thank you now il be alble to se my mustakes and mby something beter comes up