20:45, 29th Oct 2009
ap0calypse: Rejected

Yet another low-quality AoS

Picture looks very promising!

But I don't have the time to test so, sorry.

The map doesn't work at the moment, look like because of the optimiser who ****ed up the map. I've prevented the author and thus'll edit that message once it'll be reupload.
In waiting no flamming.

Improve the description!...

ouf update and remove the problem

I can review it? I'll do that right now.
Edit: Ok, since I forget alot of the things I do, I'll just play and write.
1. Loading screen looks great
2. Love the hero taverns
3. Half of the heros *say* there intelligence. But when I take a hero like Bor-Hok the leader he is Inteligence, but his main stat is str? Shanys the Shadows hero has
Agility
Strength
Intelligence
In that order, unlike the rest of them with Strength Agility Intelligence, and laureena and arkhos also have that. "sorry for all the small things, just wanto point them out"
Hero choices and unique abilitys. 9/10 FYI, the hero i'm playing, Ayane, has an ability hotkey A, which wont work, Attack overides that
Items: Talisman of Intelligence says it isnt a recipe, although it is. Just from my dota knowledge, i'm guessing it requires a circlet and a mantle. Which it does. Item overall, including ideas and such 8/10.
Terrain: Looks great including rivers and such, although could use some doodad touchups, 8/10
Gameplay: The main thing I noticed, was that I think you have a trigger so that "ANY" building that goes down, it says. Mr.wafflez has destroyed a tower! Even when I kill a barracks and such. I know this is beta, so this technically is not EXACTLY a review........well it is. I can blink into the hero selection area btw. Back to the game, I find myself over powering the creeps because they dont upgrade. Also, ayanes utlimate still says chemical rage, even though the ultimate states she is possesed. Or you could want that? 7/10Originality, as you have stated was from dota, I still love dota so I cant help but give it a 5/10.
I think i'll just keep editing this and report every spelling whatever you have in the map, including bugs.
37/50 lol.
Also, when I bought an axe item at the secret shop, it exited out of w3? Lol

well i tested this map once and there are so many bugs...

pros:
++ very nice loading screen+map preview

cons:
--almost everything else =/

the heroes (well i tested only two but they werent very good. maybe i just picked the worst but well)
chaggal(that ghoul)
his ultimate reaaaaaally sucks (cmon...summons with 675 hp at max? they dont take much hits...) also its everything else than fitting to an agile hero killer.
the other one was that hunter.
hes by far the most imballanced hero u could think of.
i mean...agi ranged+stun nuke+crit+disabler+somewhat strong ultimate, and on top of that HE HAS NO MODEL which renders him to be untargettable so hes almost unbeatable.
also some of the recipes dont work(ie the one which needs trident,gloves of quickness, and sacred blade)
btw...gloves of quickness costs 500 but sells for only 50? i really hope thats a typo u made...otherwise its veeeery ridiculous =O
the terrain is...very overused.
oh and the secret shop is very hard to find.
i actually couldnt find him(havent used cheats so...)

im very tired of the dota terrain template so i cant give any points for that.
this map is a far below average aos(i know its a beta but some stuff really feels like this map is even alpha)
1/5 + rejection if u dont edit the bugs =/

Thx for ure tests. I note bugs and submissions and will update this week.
FrozenFenrir, Hunter as Huntsman of Vile-Tis?

Hold on, did you even make this?

Crowolf said:

Thx for ure tests. I note bugs and submissions and will update this week.
FrozenFenrir, Hunter as Huntsman of Vile-Tis?

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indeed
that was the name of the hero without a model

Do I get a cookie?

Mr.Wafflez said:

Do I get a cookie?

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no
but you may have a virtual waffle

Missing models , recipes and non working unit paths. On the north line for example light and dark units dont fight, they run by each other until the meet a tower.
I wont rate this ,but the version number and condition indicates alpha for me ...