23:04, 11th Jul 2008
Dan van Ohllus:
[Rejected]
Because you resubmitted the update instead o using the update function.

lol old crazy poor peasant..

Negative Comments

[-] The orange is lacking in heavily changing shades.
[-] Pupils make him look cross-eyed.
[-] Recoloured armor.
[-] Very messy and scratched up.

Positive Comments

[+] Well done face. I suppose.

Comments: You need more shadows and highlights.

Overall Rating: 3/5

Hawkwing said:

Negative Comments

[-] The orange is lacking in heavily changing shades.
[-] Pupils make him look cross-eyed.
[-] Recoloured armor.
[-] Very messy and scratched up.

Positive Comments

[+] Well done face. I suppose.

Comments: You need more shadows and highlights.

Overall Rating: 3/5

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Man Hawkwing your a serious rater(Not that there is anything wrong with this). X) Then again I am laidback rater so anything is serious to me,

Alright buddy what we got here is a U.F.O! Wait sorry I mean S.N.W - (S)kin in (N)eed of (W)ork. You did a good job on this but I do see some brush marks but thats not bad most of the time but it is still needs to be fixed sooner or later, Then we had some shading issues it just needs some shading, And I can see there are some high light I can't tell if you put them there or they just turned out like that but I'd suggest increases them with some whiteish yellow mixed with some orange making a neat shading color. And don't say you won't do any more work on this, Because not only do moderators hate that most of the time its a good skin in need of some touch ups.

Also when you said "By the way, this is as good as you're going to get as far as making a human zombie" do you mean by you or in general because I love me a challenge!

madcat2 said:

Man Hawkwing your a serious rater(Not that there is anything wrong with this). X) Then again I am laidback rater so anything is serious to me,

Alright buddy what we got here is a U.F.O! Wait sorry I mean S.N.W - (S)kin in (N)eed of (W)ork. You did a good job on this but I do see some brush marks but thats not bad most of the time but it is still needs to be fixed sooner or later, Then we had some shading issues it just needs some shading, And I can see there are some high light I can't tell if you put them there or they just turned out like that but I'd suggest increases them with some whiteish yellow mixed with some orange making a neat shading color. And don't say you won't do any more work on this, Because not only do moderators hate that most of the time its a good skin in need of some touch ups.

Also when you said "By the way, this is as good as you're going to get as far as making a human zombie" do you mean by you or in general because I love me a challenge!

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Totaly agree, dude? try to improve. the face gotta be a little more intense, but never mind that. im sure that your skill will boost on a huge scale when you read and understand some skining tutorials. (and remember, i was a noob just like you) and it's still tough, i get my skins rejected on a dayly basis. By the holly cross i give you the power to make admirable skins But ony if you are serious about it. CYA next time ^_^

madcat2 said:

Man Hawkwing your a serious rater!

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I no rite?

The shape of the skin and such as great, the placing for the shading and whatnot as well. But it is much too scratched and lacking heavy shadows and highlights. Don't be afraid to go really dark and really light.

Most peasants don't have flys buzzing around their heads... but its fairly good 4/5

crazy bums they need foam cups with change shaking around xD

crazy bums need foam cups with change inside xD

EmawWyvern said:

Most peasants don't have flys buzzing around their heads... but its fairly good 4/5

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Well, way back then, like the middle ages, peasants were like this, lucky to get a bath once a month.