This is my first ever model, please give me any feedback on how it could be better, i guess the screeny i provided kinda sucks.

Also, i kinda know how to model, so if you have any inatimate objects you want me to make, email your request to [email protected] and i will try and get to it.

ITS DOES SUCKS OMG jk its ok just the skin sucks

its not bad just replace the skin THE FReAK U FUCKER DONT RATE DOWN THE MODEL CUZ OF THE SKIN WHY DONT YOU MAKE A MODEL SO I CAN RATE IT DOWN CUZ IT HAS A BAD SKIN EH?? lami you should add some lightning effects like that purge buff on the thing 5/5 for model because models these days get worse and worse (litteraly)

oh yeah can you by any chance make me a wall sorta like this and its conterpartas look ill get u a image


also can you make a kinda of shock post its like a light post but stiff and it has a little square on the bottom with all these wires (inside) and it closed in a box. Wait to be more clear have you seen starship troopers 2 if u havent go see it and in it youll see these poles that shock bugs. thanks again

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can i give it a better skin maybe??

Hey lami, I see you are taking modelling requests so I emailed you a while ago what I need. Hopefully you checked your mail already..

Well can be usefull model for some ppl

@Lubbe:
Just place a few course blockers and the units won't walk through....

turn the layer of the model into addalpha and it will get close to what you looking for (laser) (check the material section of your 3d studio max)

:> to much polys for a door
3/5
reduce the sides of the cylinders

Whoa shit, your right, i niver looked at poly count, that is easy to reduce.
I will attept to make that starship trooper wall.
And pathing blockers arent needed, you need to create a custom destructable, based on a horazontal door.
i built the door to specifications of the demon gate horazontal, 640 units across = 5 terrain cells.

Erm... to make it look better maybe add the lazers as team colour so it glows and you can see through it. Also it would creat a good effect if it was to die with the lazers slowly moving to the sides to open. And make the sides look more well lazery because normal lazers arn't created by white boxes. Just add more textur to it.

Just a thought. Looks good though.

Lol i agree, but it is fairly good for a first model...
I couldnt figure out how to make it go to the sides, but i just figured out how so im gunna Remake the model.

Btw, Vegito, i made that picture into a model, i need your email, or somehow of sending it to you.

[Edit] Cookie how do you do what your talking about, i cant seem to find add alpha in the materials window =/

I think it's a bit basic, I can't model, so it's okay, but something to add would be to add some redglow around the lasers, and maybe smooth out the white area where the lasers are coming out of.

if you make the lasers smaller and make three lasers instead of one it would look better(like the laser fences from tiberian sun) good first model

U HAVE TIBERIAN SUN DO U HAVE FIRESTORM ILL PLAY YOU AND ILL KILL YOU WITH NOD buggys (w00t) and lami ill send you a private message on where the link to the place you could upload it took ill send u a private message now

168 KB is pretty much for a textureless two cylinder two box model. Also, you should probably do some skinning next time rather than have bleak white boxes holding up a couple red cylinders.

http://www.wc3sear.ch/?p=Models&ID=970
That is good isnt it? my 3rd model!!!

Its an improvement, and has some sort of point... I'd still recommend trying to skin it at least a little so it looks better.

You should make it like lighter red and give it some transperancy in the red and maybe make like a little line of lightning on the beams

NICE 4/5

its boring sry, 3/5 :?

Prahaps a better picture? :roll:

its NOT a laser door, its a door with 2 red bars :evil:

-5/5

[6] This laser Door functions well as a gate: best used in modern/futuristic scenarios.

i think its good 3.5/5 but it kinda looks like bars instead of laser's

I'm pretty sure you could lower the polys a bit, and decrease the SIZE.