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human vs orcs!1.2

This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
hello! this is my first '' serious '' map dont forget that i'm a beginner. so im happy if you guys can give me some tips how i can improve my map. and i would love if you could tell me how to do it ^^

i have created the map ... but not the models they are all from hiveworkshop.com :)

thanks to:
happy tauren for his troll model and vermillion edict for his warchief thrall model and Tranquil for his king model. and also for the weapons: jo27killed with his mastersword
and Lord_Firage with Necro sword and Bone knight for the nice sword Khaz'amul. i would tripple thank sunchips with his bandit bludgeon, Megaton hammer and also infernal destroyer. i would like to thank kitabatake for the demon armor and his helmet and Thrikodius for his Lightning shield.

this map is almost like footman vs grunts
but with some other details like: here you got a king or a warchief that you got to defend because if your leader dies and your enemy picks up the flag that he drops and you cant stop it he will sell the flag to a market place in his throne room were he can buy the most powerful weapon in the game, and then you are dead.

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this map is almost like footman vs grunts
but with some other details like: here you got a king or a warchief that you got to defend because if your
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human vs orcs!1.2 (Map)

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15:47, 28th Apr 2010 ap0calypse: Rejected
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what he meens is put a decent description on there. So yeah tell about what kinda gameplay its got not that its your first map
 
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- You must give proper credit for each model you use
- This is not appealing at all
- Your description is lacking the required information
- If you are a beginner, please don't risk having yourself go through the trouble of making a map that people will post negative comments on.

And finally, if this doesn't get Rejected, I will ask Ralle to give me a pizza, spam in chat, ban myself, divide by zero, and sprout angel wings while poking a badger with a spoon. :D
 
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Well, it looks like you kept to your word as a "beginner", lol.

Anyway, you should fiddle around with worldedit or whatever you're using before you start submitting sources.


*Make sure you use correct grammar and punctuation in your names, etc.
I saw a unit named "alliance luitenant", or something, it was crudely spelled with no caps. Fix things like that, it makes it look unprofessional and sloppy.

*Learn triggers, delete your melee map triggers so you don't get those peons & Great Hall at the start.

*Give credit to the people you took models from.

*Theres no variety, let people select their heroes instead of just giving them something

*Add more player slots.

*Make custom abilities! Giving a blade master with a custom model and avatar won't cut it.

Anyway, I'm going to have to rate this a 1.5 for :( read some basic guides and learn up.
 
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I can't possibly rate this any higher than 1/5.
The triggers, terrain and objects are all awful, it is clear that you need some more practice in all categories: although most people think that creating custom units is easy, you have failed even there.

I will give you a basic mapping tutorial once you have advanced a little bit, since it's probably still too early for you.
I would suggest that you don't upload maps for quite a while, you miss out basic things like combining triggers with a shared event, variables, memory leaks, tileset, blizzard cliffs, abilities etc.

I do not mean to offend you, I'm just here to tell you how things are in it's current state.
 
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Kays... I think the credits in your description needs some work, so heres an example:

Credits:
QwertyDUDE - Blue Hat Model (loved it!)
SomEGuY - Infantry Icon and Model
nameless222 - Terraining and Triggering (thanks)

Putting them in a list (and using proper english) makes it look more organised and, to a lesser extent, more profesional.

-EDIT-
Why would ANYONE want to sell a flag anyways? Geez they might as well sell the kingdom and get an even more powerful weapon...
 
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