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Green Land Temp

This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
「Green Land」

By Jan Dane

Description
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Hi guys!..Green Land is a template that you can do whatever you want.Like a RPG.
With a lots of tree's and grass
EveryDay im searching for good terrain's and some decoration
I start with Trees in the end of the map and add some Tileset and doodads
But i just want to tell you guys,That creating or making a map is not easy
When i first join in this site,i said to my friends,Making a map is easy.
And When i use We (World Editor) i just realize that making a map is not Easy
As the other said,Take your time creating a map.
So I salute for the map makers.
Good luck to all of you!
Give me Credits if use
I hope you Like it!.

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Credits
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Thank to Eubz for the grass model

Changelog
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(N/A)
Map Description Generator 「By Vengeancekael」

Keywords:
Terrain,Template,ultra Template
Contents

Green Land Temp (Map)

Reviews
22:39, 25th Feb 2015 StoPCampinGn00b: Set to needs fix. Once you update it, it will automatically be set back to pending.

Chaosy

Tutorial Reviewer
Level 40
Joined
Jun 9, 2011
Messages
13,183
I am not really the right person to complain about terrain..

You needs better tree models and/or tiles.
More decoration objects, flowers, plants etc. And where is the water btw?
There don't seem to be any fog/weather effects either.

In general it lacks in pretty much every aspect. 1/5 awaiting update, you can make this a 2/5 with approval by spending like one more hour on it.
 
Level 21
Joined
Nov 4, 2013
Messages
2,017
This is a cheap template for plenty of reasons:

The terrain isn't very good. I find that the tile variation was badly manipulated. It's mostly Grass and Grassy Dirt. There are some traces of other tiles but they are not really noticeable. I would've liked to see some Stone Path on that Cobble Path and some Rough Dirt + Dirt instead of that overwhelming Grassy Dirt. Now talking about the doodads management, it was inadequate. I find that the grass model you used really pains the eyes. The contrast it makes with the grass tile is really terrible. That thing has a very bright green tone while the tile has a darker tone and definitely they do not fit well at all together. Something like this grass model would be more appropriate. Next, I can't feel at all the fog. A Z Start of 3000 is too large. Set it to 0 and then set the Z End to something like 6000-8000. That creates a decent fog.

In conclusion, this template doesn't meet the standards for an acceptable template. I give it 2/5 and vote for REJECTION!
 
Level 4
Joined
Jan 18, 2015
Messages
26
This is a cheap template for plenty of reasons:

The terrain isn't very good. I find that the tile variation was badly manipulated. It's mostly Grass and Grassy Dirt. There are some traces of other tiles but they are not really noticeable. I would've liked to see some Stone Path on that Cobble Path and some Rough Dirt + Dirt instead of that overwhelming Grassy Dirt. Now talking about the doodads management, it was inadequate. I find that the grass model you used really pains the eyes. The contrast it makes with the grass tile is really terrible. That thing has a very bright green tone while the tile has a darker tone and definitely they do not fit well at all together. Something like this grass model would be more appropriate. Next, I can't feel at all the fog. A Z Start of 3000 is too large. Set it to 0 and then set the Z End to something like 6000-8000. That creates a decent fog.

In conclusion, this template doesn't meet the standards for an acceptable template. I give it 2/5 and vote for REJECTION!

Ikr,Im not good..I promise i will make a better map when vacation comes..Its fine to me if you reject
 
Level 23
Joined
Apr 12, 2014
Messages
1,846
For a template the terrain was not that good and it is not that bad either but the grass you used just doesn't fit the overall look, it looks very awkward from the other grass. Many empty spaces need to be fill with doodads, others are very plain. The tile variation in some places looks good but the others they just don't fit with each other.
Overall I think you can still improve it and make it looks good and may have a chance of an approval.
I think in its current state its still not have the quality to be approve but don't lose hope, you can update and fix it. Happy Mapping! :D
2/5 - I vote for Needs fix
 
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