Gilneas arena v.122AB

Moderator · Feb 14, 2011

17:09, 29th Aug 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Rejected

Slead · Feb 14, 2011

Downloading
Edite: Nice map But The Playing area is tiny make it bigger and fix this little lag Oh and make the gnom weapon shop bigger it look like a mouse,XD thats all 3/5 ill give 5/5 when you fix this little lag and make the map bigger.Good Luck!

ksStr · Feb 14, 2011

Hi there! Maybe you wanna improve your descriptions a little bit ~
It's not really bringing out enough informations
Anyway, I won't be the only one who requires a better desc @@
Downloading.................anyway...

Yeah 'Review'!!

Reviews

-Wow, you used almost 90% of imported models @@
-It took me like 3-5 minutes chasing and killing the AI -.- both 30 level with hp of 3k.....
-Items: Your basic items are barely helping player heroes to kill each other (T.T)

snowman990 · Feb 14, 2011

ksStr said:
Hi there! Maybe you wanna improve your descriptions a little bit ~
It's not really bringing out enough informations
Anyway, I won't be the only one who requires a better desc @@
Downloading.................anyway...

yeah..i'm in hurry so i can't make a better description...

aki15 · Feb 14, 2011

-You can make screenshots in paint...
-Please improve description...
-Put the hero skills....
-Terrain seems plain... :eekani:

TheKurt009 · Feb 14, 2011

don't tell me i made you hurry up in facebook!

snowman990 · Feb 14, 2011

-You can make screenshots in paint...

Hmm...okay

-Please improve description...

-Put the hero skills....

I'll improve it soon

-Terrain seems plain...

that's because i use cutom tile skin,and the tiles kill the originally blizzard tiles
BTW,if you want to see credit,see your stygian harlot/Webspun zombie...

-Peper- · Feb 14, 2011

I'm gonna test this, after i reinstalling my 1.24e and fixing my SMART modem

Oh and you should put credits on description.

snowman990 · Feb 14, 2011

ok,add it tomomorow morning...

Aesthetics · Feb 14, 2011

This map has enough to not be completely rejected but doesn't have enough to be approved.

Some things you can fix:

Trigger Memory Leaks
"Do Nothing" actions, they are the same as putting nothing there except they the slightest little more morsel of memory for your system to commence with "doing nothing"

snowman990 · Feb 15, 2011

Aesthetics said:
This map has enough to not be completely rejected but doesn't have enough to be approved.

Some things you can fix:

Trigger Memory Leaks

"Do Nothing" actions, they are the same as putting nothing there except they the slightest little more morsel of memory for your system to commence with "doing nothing"

thanks to tell me about that,going to edit it on monday and write the credits on monday too because my mom does'nt allow me to open my laptop :vw_sad:

Btw,can you tell me where's the leaking triggers?

light bolt30 · Feb 15, 2011

An easier way of taking screenshots and uploading is; print screen and paste into paint, then you could crop and edit bits then upload to an image hosting site or the Hive album then just post it in your description.

snowman990 · Feb 15, 2011

For screeenshots,i think i can add it on friday...(I HOPE) and i want to tell you all that you can play with AI in my map.
Btw...I forgot to give credit to one user -.-"
Here a last credit,the one who make the custom cliff and custom tiles :
L_Lawliet

light bolt30 · Feb 26, 2011

Please merge your posts together Error trigger. Also please improve the description since no one will be bothered to read a wall of text; add colours, tables, hidden tags, etc. Here's a list of BB Codes to help you.

Magnet199 · Feb 26, 2011

Map seems interesting gonna test,

EDIT: sorry for late feedback, but here is what i got

The bad stuff:
- skeleton transform is no use 0_0 500 hp + for an epic fight is nothing :S
- lich is no use, the death n decay no one can see it, including my self
- clown, please i dont have any idea whats the ulti :S
- some heroes with such un-balanced skills, for example, Night Elf Archer's Sleep -_-
- there is a bug when you antimate dead, you bring your team's dead units and let them pass the portal you gain gold -_-
- Worgon is weird if you ask me, his avatar is too big, even his summoned wolfs
- the death coil, cant be used on the enemy creeps nor your team...
- items useless :S
- no repick system

The Good Stuff:
- new idea

- good terrain

- new custom spells

- "-unstuck" system is not bad

- balanced creep clash

- hero models :O amazing
- the audience

- and all other stuff

Suggestions:
- more hero registration

- useful items -_-
- more shops (including recipe)
- balance spells

Great Map, keep it up
Rate: 4/5
Rep: 1+
Vote: -

Good Job, work on it more so it can be perfect

snowman990 · Mar 4, 2011

- skeleton transform is no use 0_0 500 hp + for an epic fight is nothing :S

changed.Now when you transform you get 1000 hp bonus

- lich is no use, the death n decay no one can see it, including my self

I change the death and decay into Petrify

- clown, please i dont have any idea whats the ulti :S

The Ulti is same like voodoo doll ulti.If you don't like it,maybe you can give me an ability suggestion?

- some heroes with such un-balanced skills, for example, Night Elf Archer's Sleep -_-

Change the Night elf archer sleep ability into multishot

- there is a bug when you antimate dead, you bring your team's dead units and let them pass the portal you gain gold -_-

Oh,i didn't realize that -.-" i'll try to change it on version 1.22b

- Worgon is weird if you ask me, his avatar is too big, even his summoned wolfs

So,should i have to decrease his scaling value?

- the death coil, cant be used on the enemy creeps nor your team...

well if you're on team 1 you can't use death coil to team 2 creeps because they're undeads.

- items useless :S

I need an Item suggestion

- no repick system

I'm still a noob on trigger,but i'll try to make it on version 1.22b

- more hero registration

I will try on the next version if i can

- useful items -_-

i need an item suggestion

- more shops (including recipe)

okay,i'll make it on the next version

- balance spells

I will balance some hero abilities on the next version

Adiktuz · Mar 5, 2011

for the death coil, trigger it don't use the default one...

for items, maybe try to make a thread on the idea factory?

snowman990 · Mar 5, 2011

for the death coil, trigger it don't use the default one...

sigh -.- ... okay i'll try on the next version

for items, maybe try to make a thread on the idea factory?

Hmmm...okay

Midnighters · Mar 5, 2011

Reviewed by Midnighters

Triggers/Scripts

Your triggers need work. A lot of them leak, there are location leaks, and some of them could be easily condensed.

Object Editor Work

Most of the heroes are original Wc3 heroes, with newly named spells, and the spells have the same affect as the original. My friend who I tested it with, used Paladin, and said that the spells for it are far to regular, and do not seem changed, as well as the heals are a bit rigged.

The Immobilize spell is broken, and causes the opponent to be stuck in one place for ever. The lich's spells have the same hotkeys, you need to make the hotkeys something like "QWERT", that way they are easier to reach on the keyboard.

Terrain

Now, onto the subject of terrain. The terrain is poorly made, you spammed doodads around the edges, and doodads in the arena, to try and make it more interesting, but it took your eye off the game, and made you think, "What was the maker trying to accomplish here?"

Gameplay

The gameplay was a bit boring, because you and the opponents heroes spawned in the same spot. The units at the bottom did nothing, and you gained level 30 instantly, which makes it no fun. The heroes need a lot of work, and the hero pick system allows more than one hero per player, which needs fixed as well.

Final Judgment

Overall, I give the map a rating of 1.0, Vote for Rejection

snowman990 · Mar 6, 2011

Your triggers need work. A lot of them leak, there are location leaks, and some of them could be easily condensed.

i'm still a newb in trigger making.but thanks for telling it.
Most of the heroes are original Wc3 heroes, with newly named spells, and the spells have the same affect as the original. My friend who I tested it with, used Paladin, and said that the spells for it are far to regular, and do not seem changed, as well as the heals are a bit rigged.

The Immobilize spell is broken, and causes the opponent to be stuck in one place for ever. The lich's spells have the same hotkeys, you need to make the hotkeys something like "QWERT", that way they are easier to reach on the keyboard.

Hmm..That's weird :O i didn't know about that....Going to make the hotkeys into QWERT at the next ver.

Now, onto the subject of terrain. The terrain is poorly made, you spammed doodads around the edges, and doodads in the arena, to try and make it more interesting, but it took your eye off the game, and made you think, "What was the maker trying to accomplish here?"

so,how should i make the terrain looks like?

The gameplay was a bit boring, because you and the opponents heroes spawned in the same spot. The units at the bottom did nothing, and you gained level 30 instantly, which makes it no fun. The heroes need a lot of work, and the hero pick system allows more than one hero per player, which needs fixed as well

Well,going to change it on the next ver.
thanks for the reviews -.-"

EloTheMan · Mar 8, 2011

Use this one: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...quick-tutorial-common-triggering-tips-190802/

It might be able to help you with your leak problems :wink:

Orcnet · Mar 28, 2011

Map Review

"Gilneas Arena" A Hero[AOS?] Arena map style where players choose different types of characters and win the arena for themselves. map made by Error_trigger.

Gilneas Arena v.122AB

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	5/5	91-100	A

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	4/5	81-90%	B

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	3/5	75-80%	C

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	2/5	70-74%	D

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	1/5	50-69%	F

General:

Gameplay-[5/5]
Note: Were I pronounce your game challenging or a waste of time.

Playability-[5/5]
Note: This part tells me if the game is rather fun and can be played again and again.

Terrain-[5/5]
Note: Were I tell your game's environmental display is either great or terrible.

Managing-[5/5]
Note: This is were I explain the output or outcome quality of the game.

Bug/s
Note: No score, just to tell your map has bugs on it or simply bug-free.

Overall-[20/20]

About My Reputations:

My complements for the Maker/s of the map's game.

Were I explain your map needs to get fix or make an improvement of your work.

Gameplay

The game was good, but not good enough.

Playability

The game ended up boring to play over and over again, can you add more features in the game? you know? like a boss fights, secret dungeons, 1v1 arena etc, so your game is pack of fun and enjoyable at the same time.

Terrain

Terrain was too simple, I can advise you to enlarge your map and make exit routes blindspots for players to expand with, instead of those simple like arena maps. I want you to improve, so improve!

Managing

I did not enjoy the map's output. in my observations, Items were so few, heroes already start at there cap levels that makes it boring! it won't make the players enjoy leveling up and experiencing hardship. and because of it, the AoS concept of yours is useless, no place to hide and seek, and the portal thingy is kinda weird, and your credit presentation, how come you made dummy units that shows there credits? why not just show it in your map info, or quest area?

Bug/s

I think there were leaks in it, because when you buy your hero, they somehow pop in the middle tavern and then pops at the arena, I hope you find it and fix it right away

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	8/20	70%	D

[Conditioned]
Hope you can do better than before, Goodluck!
happy map-making!

snowman990 · Mar 29, 2011

The game ended up boring to play over and over again, can you add more features in the game? you know? like a boss fights, secret dungeons, 1v1 arena etc, so your game is pack of fun and enjoyable at the same time.

i want to add the 1v1 and boss fight,but i was suck at triggering

Terrain was too simple, I can advise you to enlarge your map and make exit routes blindspots for players to expand with, instead of those simple like arena maps. I want you to improve, so improve!

hmm...okay i'll make it bigger on the next ver.

I did not enjoy the map's output. in my observations, Items were so few, heroes already start at there cap levels that makes it boring! it won't make the players enjoy leveling up and experiencing hardship. and because of it, the AoS concept of yours is useless, no place to hide and seek, and the portal thingy is kinda weird, and your credit presentation, how come you made dummy units that shows there credits? why not just show it in your map info, or quest area?

-.- ok...if i hope i can change those on the next ver...actually i'm already add credits on the quest area...i'm going to edit the dummy on the next ver...i was so busy right now.

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