15:39, 7th Apr 2009 by bounty hunter2:
A map that lacks more quality, see posts #4 and #5, Rejected.

You need better details of your campaign. Do not write down the whole of the story in brief. Some screenshots can help you.

okay i have just dled title have typo easteren=eastern you should fix that and then several typo's in description:
Drenei= Draenei
brotheren= Bretheren as far as i remember
then some grammar i dont wanna type out pm if you wanna know
assult on Sylvanss= assault on Sylvanas
obout= about
beggining= beginning
there is more though
just played 5 min first mission HOLY GOD their was like 10 typo's in start cinematic (if 10 can do it) and there was 3 persons talking and reinforcements is spelled wrong seriously get someone to correct it for you it is hard to follow the campaign because of those typo's coz you have to think what it is fx Captain have you spelled Capitan:/ 1/5 i say this is Rejected fix the typos and that then it will be good enough for approval i guess oh yes you can play the last part of the campaign to start with fix that and you prob could get it up to 3/5
~Cyper95~

Played about half of your campaign. Now, I'll review it.

Chapter one

[+] At, least, you'll used an melee AI, with is accptable for a campaign, but not recommended.

[+ -] The terrain is in the middle of Lacking/Average. Some tile variation, a bit of doodads randomly placed, some heightened terrain.

[-] The cinematics are just the standard Bird-view camera, with some pans here and there. An campaign needs much better cines, like the Blizzard ones.
[-] The gameplay.
Wait a moment, the reiforcements arrive. Raid the (ugly) base, kill all the undead, enter the gate. Victory. This is very boring.
[-] Where's the creativy? Naara it's a Draenei, and have human abilities? No "draeneish" special attack? Also, where's the story? The draenei commands a human force to destroy the undead base. Needs more story.

Chapter 2

I'm too lazy to write like the first, so, a normal review...

The terrain is even worst than chapter 1. Add more tile variation, and doodads. The objective is just kill the evil guys, enter the gate. Victory. Out of boredom, just
Warpten, Pointbreak, mass footman. And you're done with the map. Cinematic is the same as the above.

Chapter 3

You just, used a melee map, put some units in it, and done! This is stealing.

The retake of Silvermoon

What you did to the glorious Silvermoon?? Rocks, ugly walls, no streets, no crumbled houses. You have to thank heavens that Elenai didn't saw this, until now.

My review seens cruel, and just to say you're bad. But your campaign really needs much, much work in it, to become acceptable.

Under this circustances, I vote for it Disapproval.

Death of Varrimathrias?
Hes name is Varimathras.

he lacks English skills:/

I forgot to say, that there's really a lot of typos and grammar mistakes. Also, why this insanely big size?