General Frank:

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This model is too poorly edited for THW's standards. This is no place for first tries.

Well, It's my first model, and I used a tutorial.

I think it turned out alright... Opinions please?

Suggestions would be taken with open arms, even though I can do almost nothing yet, w/o step-by-step stuff.

Well this can be done entirely with triggers and there is no need to import anything custom. Anyway, I suggest altering the skin, make him look dark and burning. That would look interesting with those fire emitters you added. Good luck with modeling in the future.

I don't know how to alter the skin... :'(
And thanks for the luck, I'll need it.

Why upload this? It is an exact copy of the one you make with the Magos fireemitter Tutorial... so would have been better if you atleast changed something (color, the model used or where the flames was or something similar to this but not flames..) But else anyway yes it works no wonder....

Don't submit that kind of model and say "hey it's my first model!" you seems proud of this shit but keep it for yourself.

STFU IF YOU HAVE NOTHING GOOD TO SAY. And I already said it was made by the tutorial, SO LEARN TO READ SOMETIME, PEOPLE.

You guys are retarded. Someone is taking the time to hopefully become a modeller and all you can say OMFG THIS SHIT SUX! Bunch fucking ingrates. Get over yourselves.

Anyways. I like the flames and the model looks great however you should take some more tutorials and learn to alter the model a little more. Such as: Removing and adding a new weapon, Different skin and maybe placing the fire in specific places. Also you should try and lower the file size seeing as 430kb is almost half of what a decent Bnet map should be.