It's good you updated the map, but there are still some issues:
- Taverns should be closer and more accessible to all players; right now, you can only get a tavern hero if you buy a transport ship which means you will be economically behind if you decide to go for a tavern hero; Tavern should either be near players' starting locations or be connected to the mainland with shallow water
- I'm afraid it's unfair to the players if the green creep camps are different from one another; this means one player may have an easier time creeping than the other and that's not good; I really recommend making them all the same for each player
- The area where top and bottom gold mines are located should be made bigger, since right now they are cramped and grant very little wood and building space
- I think you could add more locations where you can drop your units with the transport ship; otherwise, players might feel like it's not worth using the ships and just go for air units only

It's ok for now, but with some improvements it can be a really fun map.

The closest neutral camp might be too near to the base.

In terms of Altered Melee this map is too simple. I suggest either improving it a lot or turning it into a normal melee.

Things to consider:
Competitive Melee Map
How to create Melee Maps
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
How to: Create a Full-working Custom Race

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Awaiting Update.

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