15:17, 18th Oct 2009
Pyramidhe@d: i see very little, almost nonexistant blood. the backgrounds look like you've just been having random fun with smudge
also read up on what enjoy said in the comments

i like this one

Looks kinda good, but whats that brown thingy around the sword?

I like the sword, but those white things, whatever they are, they are strange.
Maybe add a different glow.

@OMG: I think it is glow.

i like the way the sword looks. it looks nice and clean. a bit too clean... Could we see some WIPs or a Full Picture to see if this is your work?

if it is your work, I must commend you for your hard work, but it will still need fixing. You will really need to enlarge the sword as it it way too small to be seen right now.

But Overall, its just WAY TOO PLAIN. fix up the BG so it makes the icon look more Exciting! We see way too many sword icons on the hive and it isn't really impressing us all that much. TRY SOMTHING NEW! The glow(?) could also use a bit of work.

(Unrated) Until i see a Full Pic or a WIP, im not rating this

~Dentothor

Trying to figure out what those hairy caterpillar-looking things are...

I think the sword needs to be enlarged. It's far too small right now.

I like the sword, but I hate the background. Again.. Zoom in. Show details on the sword. I don't know what you should make as background. Maybe blood.

enjoy pretty much summarised what i needed to say. right now those things on the background is way too distracting and you havent emphasised the blood enough